Why must I see
the flaws surrounding me
a laugh line here, a crow’s foot there
the endless pulling
of each gray hair
the muscles that have flipped,
to say the least
either way, they’re not
where they’re supposed to be
Those youthful pages
of our precious photo albums
portray an image
that was once okay
now, the magnified flaws
have definitely found their way
Yet, your soul doesn’t see
what my mirror shows me
You see the blue-green ocean
when you look deeply into my eyes
You feel my long, soft hair
and marvel in its silkiness
My laugh lines joyfully remind you
of our endless happiness
When our hearts beat
as close as can be
all that matters
is our loving connection
Your adoration runs deeper
and through your devoted actions
seeps absolute affection
So blessed am I
to have found complete
Perfection
Copyright 2011
Inspired by
http://terri0729.wordpress.com/2011/12/09/what-i-see-this-weeks-fwf-take-a-good-look-at-yourself/
Baydreamer ~ Lauren Scott 
That is soooo gorgeous, Lauren. What a beautiful portrayal of all that is perfect.
Thank you so much, Angela…yes, in the midst of imperfection, lies perfection~
This is just beautiful Lauren, everything that love is all about! 🙂
Thank you, Gabby, I agree! 🙂
True love can see no flaws, notice no ageing, and magnifies the inner beauty of the recipient. You are truly lucky to say you have that.
Thank you so much, Joe! Your comment is poetic in itself and a beautiful quote~ I am lucky, with all sincerity…thank you! 🙂
If only for a moment,
we could have such joy.
If only for a moment,
we would even know
that we can find
that joy
within ourselves
and in our loved ones
we would be so blessed.
Your words are lovely, Sandra, thanks for sharing~
A beautiful expression, Lauren. It is a challenge at any age being satisfied with our outward appearance, then as we age we look back and think we would be satisfied now to have that back. I have worked with some lovely people and I have heard all of them cite flaws of some kind that plague them. I simply decline pictures. I don’t remember what I looked like years ago 🙂
Thanks, VW! You are so right about wishing we looked like we did back then. I think it’s normal for most to cite their flaws, but when it becomes obsessive, then that’s problematic. It’s nice for anyone to be accepted for who they truly are and not because of their physical appearance~ 🙂
What a perfect love poem. Very well balanced and flowing. Just a really excellent work!
Thank you so much! I truly value your feedback, zumpoems! 🙂
Beautiful again!
Thank you, again, David! I really appreciate your kind words!
Awesome!
Thanks, Sis!
Simply awesome, Lauren!
Thanks so much, BG! 🙂
It’s really beautiful 🙂
Thanks so much, Autumn! Sorry I missed this one! Hugs!
Simply beautiful… made me go “aaaahhh!” Such an uplifting love poem!!!
Thanks, Betty! For some reason, I missed your comment; I’m so sorry! Blessings and Hugs to you!
A beautiful poem reminding us so eloquently that we are indeed perfected by love. Thank you, Lauren.
Rose, thank you so much for your beautiful, poetic words!
Amazing poem
Thanks, PJ! I always appreciate your continued support~
Gorgeous! 🙂
Thanks very much, Eve! 🙂
So beautiful! Thanks for making me smile today x
Awww…now you’ve made me smile; thanks so much for your kind comment! 🙂
this is beautiful!
true love, it is! 😉
Thanks, Nanda! 🙂
Beautiful write!
Thank you so much! 🙂
Simply wonderful 🙂
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words and support! 🙂
This is lovely. It makes age seem like a meaningless made up concept1
Thank you and what a wonderful observation. 🙂
Wonderful as always LScott! 🙂 This poem is the true definition of true, honest and real love.
Thank you, TPG! I always appreciate your kind comments and he seems to be a keeper! 🙂
Well, your beauty is obvious in your words. Lovely poem Lauren.
Awww…thanks, Pam! 🙂
You are so blessed, you have found unconditional love – what a gift!
Thank you so much for your comment; I do feel very lucky~
Truly inspired. Your muse is enviable. 🙂
Thank you so much, Nel, for your very encouraging words! 🙂
love the feminine process of drawing us into love
What a lovely comment! Thank you so much for your visit and kind words!
You certainly express yourself very well! Enjoying your poetry.
Oh, thank you so much! Your kind words mean a lot to me!
Beautiful!
Thank you so much, MissDawn! 🙂
this is so beautifully written! I love it!
Thank you very much! 🙂
its elating,
your posts have shown me all the colors of love.. you have made me a strong believer!
this one is so vivid… I’m in awe
The words that stirred me the most are ” Yet, your soul doesn’t see
what my mirror shows me…”
Ohh Lauren this is wonderful. I loved it!
Awww..thank you, Arch! I’m in awe knowing I have made you a strong believer! My hubby and I met in a funny way…if you haven’t read it, I invite you to, then you’ll know things happen when we least expect them to… 🙂
http://lscotthoughts.com/2011/11/05/our-story/
Thank you again, for your very kind comment!
yes.
Thank you, Jess! 🙂
It’s funny to reflect on our perceptions of our own imperfections and how they change with age!
Yes, it’s very interesting, indeed! Thanks so much for your visit and comment!
Love is a beautiful — and foolproof — and impenetrable — thing.
Thanks for this wonderful poem!
Yes, it is…thank you, Emilino! I appreciate your visit and kind words!
Blessed indeed.
Thanks very much, Richard, for your kind comment and for your visit!
Amazing! Well done!
Thank you again! I appreciate your kind words, tremendously!
A lovely piece of poetry my friend and
as I always say, age is just a number
and no matter how many years pass
us by, the love of true sweetness will
never age, indeed love is beyond the
realms of infinity…
Have a very nice day today my friend 🙂
Androgoth
Thank you so much! Yes, you are right, age makes no difference if the love is true~ Have a wonderful day, too! 🙂
Lauren
‘all that matters
is our loving connection’ so true. loved this poem.
Thank you! It is true, isn’t it? I appreciate your kind words!
So glad for your joy as well! It’s a truly beautiful thing, and you say it so sweetly here. Thank you for sharing your happiness with us. 🙂
Kathryn
Thanks, Kathryn, I know you can relate, which is also a beautiful thing! 🙂
What lovely thoughts expressed in verse. Thank you Lauren 🙂
Thanks, Eric, I just wanted to share with you; it seemed perfect with your haiku, so thanks for taking the time! 🙂
Love the message.
Thanks so much! 🙂