Poetic words slide from your lips, so tenderly, as they
Rest in my heart, softened and beating contentedly
Oh, you need not say more, for you’ve already
Mesmerized my soul to its very core and
I shall guard your love eternally, for
Surely, you can see the same
Emotions in my eyes,
Lauren Scott © 2013
Photo: Google Images
34 thoughts on “Promises – Acrostic”
Just beautiful written Lauren! God Bless
Thanks so much, PJ, I’m glad you enjoyed this and hugs and blessings to you, my friend..xo
You very welcome, you truly talented! Thank for hugs, sending some your way! Many Blessings 🙂
You prompted this, if I might share
Romance in the air
Oblivious to all
My focus on her
Invariably it ends
Sad goodbyes brim
Eyes turn wet
Sobs fill the air
Dark I know – unlike your poem, so lovely and eternal.
Now how did I prompt “darkness” through my poem, Eric? 🙂 Even though your words are dark, they are beautiful and thanks for my complement, as well! Have a great day!
Gorgeous Lauren HBL ❤ XX
Thanks, Chris! HBL xo ♥ Hope your day is a good one! 🙂
Lovingly beautiful! Well done darling!
Thanks so much, Chatty, and I appreciate you stopping by when you’re on a break, too! 🙂 xo
I love this acrostic poem Lauren, it flows beautifully! xxx
Thanks, Sharon, it’s been awhile since I’ve tried one of these! 🙂 xo
Beautifully written Lauren
Thanks, Al! 🙂
You’re welcome 🙂
Thanks, Charlene! ♥
I love this, Lauren! You are so talented!…and blessed!
Have a happy Halloween today, my friend
Love and hugs xoxo
Aww…thanks, Deb and wishing you a fun day today, too! Boo! 😉
Lots of love and hugs! xoxo
Very romantic and true. I love these lines: “Oh, you need not say more, for you’ve already/Mesmerized my soul to its very core.”
Thanks so much, Shelia! This was a prompt on another blog that I wrote in about 3 minutes, then edited it a little and decided to post it here. I haven’t done an acrostic in a long time. I’m working on a Sonnet, which is a little more challenging. 🙂 Have a fun and safe day! xo
I can only smile, while embracing your lovely words…beautiful poem Lauren!!!
Thanks so much, Wendell, my mission is accomplished then if I made you smile. 🙂
A very heartfelt expression of love.
Thanks so much, Binky, for your lovely comment!
Brilliantly done 🙂
Thanks so much, Sue! Hugs for a happy weekend! xo
Very sweet Lauren.
Thanks a bunch, Kim! 🙂 xx
very romantic! I liked it!
Thanks, Sis! xo
I like it when a poem is pretty short but says it all!!
Just beautiful. And this photo… it’s perfect!
Hope you had a fantastic time for Halloween, Lauren.
Thanks so much, Cha, I feel the same and I’m glad you enjoyed this one, too! We had a mellow Halloween, maybe 15 kids and of course, it’s different for us now with our daughter out of the house and our son being 18. Very mellow, but it’s all good! 🙂
So romantic, and beautifully formed … just as, it seems, your love for each other is. XO
Aww…thanks, Diane, for your lovely comment! ♥