Pulses race with empty time
His mustache sweeps
over creamy skin
drinking in sweetness
becoming drunk with need
in a moment defining the bond
they share
a moment needed
more than air they breathe
and as they reach the peak
eyes on each other
they smile
anticipating
next time…
© LScott 2013
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author & Poet 
I love that first line, “pulses race with empty time.” Nice reminder that passion like this isn’t just for Valentine’s Day. 🙂
Thanks so much, Sheila, for your wonderful insight…Hugs! 🙂
Very nice! I can’t help but imagine that the moustache might tickle though!
Thanks, Joe, and delightfully so! 🙂
Very passionate, Lauren!
Sending you love and hugs! xoxo
Thanks so much, Deb, and sending them back to you, too! xoxo
I can just see this moment unfolding! Exquisite!
Aww…thanks, Christy! xx 🙂
Lauren, I looked for what you said was for me but not sure what you mean… Oh and sending hugs to you while I am here xx
Just the sweet treats on fb, which I think you already saw (sorry for the confusion)…and thanks for the hugs! ♥ xxx
awww, now I get it!! Hugs for you Lauren (who I love being connected to on FB too!). No need to apologize xx
Okay, good, and me, too! 🙂 xoxo
wow Lauren, very passionate indeed! Now I know why my lady said it’s “ok” if I ever want to grow a mustache 😀
Thanks, Scott, and yeah, his mustache is nice, to say the least! 🙂
Tastefully hot. Nice writing.
Aww…thanks so much, Kim! 🙂
Wow….I guess I won’t be trimming my mustache any time soon…..
Love Me
That would be a great idea, Honey! Love me, too! ♥
Love the steamy stuff you write so nicely, Lauren!
Awww…thanks so much, Caddo! 🙂
Smokin’ hot, Lauren!
🙂 🙂
Very strong words, Lauren. Virginia XXOO
Thanks, Virginia, I think… 🙂 Just a little fun! xoxo
Actually – that’s the kind of fun I like to hear about. You go girl. V.
Just like great Asian foods: steamy and spicy, yet tender. 😀
What a perfect reply, Kathryn! You are awesome! 🙂
Wow, the emotions really come through on this one. I also love how you didn’t add anything extra–short and sweet! Beautifully written. 🙂
Thank you so much, Elaine, for your wonderful comment!
Brimming with graceful passion and intimacy – that’s what this gave me.
Thank you Lauren.
God bless,
Eric
What a beautiful comment, Eric, thank you; sometimes, it’s fun to deviate out of the box…
Hugs and blessings to you!
Mmmm … tantalizing, sensuous and totally yummy! Love this, Lauren! 🙂 xoxox
Aww…thanks, Julie! These are fun once in awhile! Love and hugs to you and hope you’re feeling better! 🙂 xoxo
You write some intense love poetry, Lauren! Makes me realize what I’m missing … and why my kitties get so many kisses! XO
Aww…thanks, Diane, and you made me smile! Believe me, Copper still gets tons of kisses, too! This more “steamy” stuff is still new for me, but fun, once in awhile! Love and hugs to you!