Those bedroom eyes…
It’s in the stare
before the leaning
A little heavy breathing
Mesmerizing to the core
Sweet, in slow motion
An electric pull
to curling toes
Body heat rising
in a warm embrace
Melting beyond reason
When lips unite~
46 thoughts on “THE KISS”
I’m glad you thought so, Tim! 🙂 Thanks so much!
Thank you very much! I appreciate your complement! 🙂
🙂 🙂 Thanks Betty!
Thanks so much, Angela! I’m glad you thought this one was yummy! 🙂
Am I the only one who sees the Edward and Bella kiss in front of my eyes when I read this? I wish I was half as good as you are when it comes to writing such uplifting work!
I haven’t seen any of the Twilight movies, so I can’t comment on that, but I’m glad you liked this! And thanks so much for your kind words; truly humbling, really! If I can lift spirits, then I’ve accomplished a great deal~ 🙂
as you say, ‘simply delicious’. I loved it.
Thanks so much, David, I’m so glad you loved this one, too! 🙂
o yeah! your poem actual takes my mind back! 😀
Thanks so much! I’m glad I reminded you of a wonderful memory! 🙂
kiss it is… soooo sweeeet and electrifying! love this! 😀
Thanks so much, Gertie! 🙂
wooowww!! tantalizing, and so very beautiful.. 🙂
Thank you, Abi! I appreciate your very kind words! 🙂
oh wow, love this 😉 perfect words, gets the mental images flowing!!
Thanks, Elle! I’m glad the imagery was vivid! 🙂
Wow!! Brilliant! So beautifully described!!!
Thanks so much, Jennifer…I wouldn’t say “brilliant” but very nice complement and I’m so glad you enjoyed this!
This is so absolutely sexy. I could feel the rush. 🙂 I love this – Global tilting
Made my morning, LScott. Thank you.
Thanks so much, Nel! I’m glad you felt the emotions, too! I appreciate your very kind comment! 🙂
Good heavens…wait…let me read it again
Ok, wow. It’s seductively brilliant! You really must tone it down a bit or you will make all the rest of us look bad 😉
But really, I love this Lauren. Wonderful
Your comment has me laughing out loud! You’re too kind, although, there is no way I would make anyone look bad. However, I’m glad you “enjoyed” this! There’s nothing like that special kiss! 🙂
Laurennnnn! u make me wish, u make me long, dream…….Hmmm, Lauren *winking*
Thanks, Nita, I’m glad you liked it and may all your wishes come true! 🙂
‘wildfires spreading’ well crafted illustration
Thank you so much, David! I appreciate your kind words!
oh so wonderful the rapture of romance… seductive yet classy..
Thanks so much, Arch, I’m glad you found it classy, too! 🙂
Wow!! very nicely written. passionate
It is amazing Lauren.
Thanks, J, I’m glad you liked this one! 🙂 I appreciate your feedback!
Love the ending: indeed, it IS simply delicious (such a lucious poem overall) when lips TRULY unite, reaching down to tie our heartstrings together, reaching down into our soul’s dearest desires.
Rose, you said it better than I did! 🙂 Thank you again, for your lovely comment!
Beautiful! May we all have those electrifying moments.
Thanks, Sandra, yes, I agree with you! 🙂
What a beautifully sensual poem…
Thank you so much! 🙂
Im a sucker for a great kiss. A kiss can reveal so much. It can be the beginning of something beautiful or the end of something that hasnt even begun. Good stuff!!
Very well said and so am I! 🙂 Thank you so much for your continued support, too! I really appreciate it! 🙂
Oh, yeah–gotta love the steamy romance, mm hmm!!! Great job–we must be twins from different families…
I’m glad you liked this one, too, Caddo! It was fun and intoxicating just writing it! Who knows, maybe we are twins?? 🙂
Beautiful, Lauren. I love it! Hugs xx
Oh wow! It is similar. You know what they say “Great Minds…..=-)