Tomorrow…
She sees its promise
in his eyes
Her heart leaps
for today was not enough
She wants all of him
Lauren Scott © 2017
Photo: Google
46 thoughts on “Expectations (A Shadorma)”
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Tomorrow…
She sees its promise
in his eyes
Her heart leaps
for today was not enough
She wants all of him
Lauren Scott © 2017
Photo: Google
Comments are closed.
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
Wonderful when someone has that feeling. Thanks, Lauren
And that’s why I love romance, John. 🙂 Thanks so much, and have a good day!
😀
Beautiful image that goes with the poem, Mom! Love you!
Thanks, Steph, I thought it would work well, and it’s great to see you here, too! Love you back!
Lauren!!!! 💗💗
I assume you like, Maureen? 🙂 Thanks, my friend 💕
Oh, yes I do. 😊 hugs my friend.💗💗
Aww, thanks, and hugs back to you also! 💗💗
Lauren, a lovely, romantic shadorma! ❤️
Thanks, Betty! I think I like this form. 🙂 💓
Beautiful, Lauren! ❤
Thanks, Bette! Have a lovely day! 💓
That’s lovely 🙂
Thanks, Eric! I’m glad you liked this bit of romance. 🙂
A story created in just a few lines. Very nice.
Thanks so much, Ian. I’m beginning to like this short form, and it always amazes me how so much can be conveyed in few lines.
Excellent Lauren.. and its so nice to see you back deep in your poetry again my friend.. ❤
Aww, thanks, Sue, for your lovely comment! Wishing you a blessed day, my friend…💝
You too xxx
So you’ve been bitten by the shadorma bug then? 😀
I have, Ben, and it’s all your fault. Luckily though, it’s not painful, but quite pleasant. 😉
The pleasure is mutual, I assure you, Lauren. 🙂 And don’t forget that one is not restricted to a single sestet.
GROWTH
In our youth
We would give ourselves
Foolishly
We admit
Only partially awake
Yet there’s more to it
For later
As we grew wiser
We became
Discerning
Let us be loved yet also
Explore our own core
❤
Oh, I know. My first one had two. 🙂 And this is wonderful, as always, Ben! Thank you!
Of course. My apologies. Several folks have begun publishing shadorma as and I got mixed up. 😳
I get it, but of course, I never get mixed up. 😀
You will, my dear, you will. 🙂
Just kidding. I’ve “been there” much too often! ☺☺
Yes, I was kidding too. I did get your meaning. 🙂
Oops, I wasn’t sure. Sorry! 🙂
No apology required, Lauren. 🙂
Lauren, this shadorma is so romantic and beautiful. It gives me shivers – the good kind. Love and hugs, dear friend.
Aww, thanks, Michelle! That’s really nice to hear. As you can see, I’ve taken a liking to this form. 🙂 Love and hugs to you, too. 💗💗
Ah, lovely poem, my dear Lauren! 🙂 love and hugs to you xxxxxxxx
Thanks so much, Marina! Hope you’re having a good day/evening. 🙂 Much love back to you, my friend…💓
Very succinct!
Thanks, Binky!
So powerful and sweet at the same time! A wonderfully romantic shadorma, Lauren! 😀 I can already foretell that I will be very happy every time I read one of your wonderful poems! xoxo ❤
Thanks again, Sarah! Shadorma is a new form I learned, and it’s actually fun to work with. 🙂 Your words warm my heart and make my day. I hope you continue to enjoy my writing whenever you stop by. Hugs 💗💗💗
I know I will! 😄 Hugs! 💕
Wonderful poem👌👌😍
Thanks so much! 😊
Welcome😃😃
Lovely, Lauren!
Thanks again, Don, for all your visits and encouraging comments. They are very much appreciated. I took on this November Shadorma challenge, so I’ve been busy. 🙂
Beautiful. We just hope they keep the love. =) Life has a way of flattening it.