22 thoughts on “FALLING”

1. your poems are so cheerful, Lauren! They make me happy!

   November 22, 2011 at 2:16 pm Reply

   1. Thanks, Nanda! I do have some sad ones, but the cheerful ones make a happier day, don’t they? I’m glad my writing makes you happy! 🙂

      November 22, 2011 at 2:19 pm Reply

2. This is just beautiful Lauren! 🙂

   November 22, 2011 at 3:10 pm Reply

   1. Thanks so much, Gabby! 🙂

      November 22, 2011 at 4:11 pm Reply

3. I love the last part!

   November 22, 2011 at 4:34 pm Reply

   1. Thanks, Dianda! I’m glad you enjoyed this one! 🙂

      November 23, 2011 at 2:52 am Reply

4. my goodness the last verse blew me away. amazing Lauren.

   November 22, 2011 at 5:08 pm Reply

   1. Thanks so much, Arjun, I’m humbled by your emotions! 🙂

      November 23, 2011 at 2:52 am Reply

5. I love it 🙂

   November 22, 2011 at 7:44 pm Reply

   1. Thanks very much, Autumn! 🙂

      November 23, 2011 at 2:53 am Reply

6. Lauren, I am so glad you included “caring soul” as one of your qualifications for being the chosen lover! It would have to be THAT deep(from the soul) and wide(from the stretching that caring empathy causes) to fulfill your expectations for this love experience, wouldn’t it?

   November 22, 2011 at 9:34 pm Reply

   1. Hi Rose,

      I wholeheartedly agree, which is the reason for adding that important choice of words…thanks so much for your comment and encouragement!

      November 23, 2011 at 2:54 am Reply

7. I love how your poems are so optimistic! My “poems” are so dark 🙂

   November 22, 2011 at 11:48 pm Reply

   1. Thank you! Although, some of mine are sad, but even when I start writing, I usually like to lift them up…it just depends..but, thanks so much for your comment! It’s okay to write “darker” poems, too, it’s how we express ourselves. I’ll be over to your site soon, too! 🙂

      November 23, 2011 at 2:56 am Reply

8. I’m drawn to the amorous emotions you elicit in each piece of writing…. speak volumes about your personality.

   November 24, 2011 at 8:12 pm Reply

   1. Thanks so much…even your reply is poetic, which is the reason your complement means a great deal to me!

      November 24, 2011 at 10:27 pm Reply

9. “I was lost
   inside your dreamy eyes”

   Beautifully romantic and touching. The deep devotion conveyed in these lines is inspiring and bright. You have a beautiful heart

   November 25, 2011 at 9:54 pm Reply

   1. Awww..thank you so much, VW! I am very touched by your words~

      November 27, 2011 at 3:21 am Reply

10. Your first line, ‘Here I am with open arms’, embraces the reader with love… beautiful piece – an invitation to dance.

    November 27, 2011 at 9:40 am Reply

    1. Thank you, Angela; I appreciate your kind and poetic reply!

       November 27, 2011 at 5:20 pm Reply

11. ♥¸¸.•*¨*•♥ Lovely & Romantic ♥•*¨*•.¸¸ ♥

    November 28, 2011 at 7:00 pm Reply

    1. Thank you, Jessie! 🙂

       November 29, 2011 at 12:35 am Reply