They leisurely stroll
down the moonlit path
Their shoulders brush
as he takes her hand
Soft to the touch
Her eyes, beguiling,
She leans into him
and catches him smiling
A serenading breeze
follows them for awhile
He’s enchanted by her presence
and her dazzling style
The path’s end draws closer
He pulls her to embrace
Her lips, breathtakingly near
He kisses her, cradling her face
32 thoughts on “GOOD NIGHT, MY LOVE”
Love it! 🙂 im so tempted to share some of mine
Thanks, PJ, and keep sharing! 🙂
Ty Lauren, almost ready to share. I nominated you for award, so make sure to check my blog when you get chance. God Bless 🙂
Hi PJ, I am stunned and honored, at the same time. I am grateful that my poetry has touched you and it’s been great getting to know you through our writing. Thank you so much for this wonderful nomination. I really appreciate it! 🙂
I can feel the love 🙂 very nice!
I’m glad you could feel the emotions! Thanks, Maiya, for your kind words!
Great post thanks. I really enjoyed it very much.
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Honey, Very nice…keep up the inspirational work. Loving you always, MS
Thanks, Honey, and love you always, too!
I love this one 🙂 very much can I feel the love, too!
Thanks so much, Autumn! I’m glad you felt the emotions! 🙂
this is one of my favorites, mom! great work 🙂 it reminds me of the song “Can you feel the love tonight?” and in reading this poem, I could!
Thanks, Steph, and I can see the relation with the song, too! Love you!
This is so blissfully direct and remains beautiful throughout.
Thanks so much, Rose, for your very kind words!
Loved it Lauren. such love sigh!
Thank you, Arjun! I’m glad it made you “sigh.” 🙂
a beautifully romantic poem of love and what alovely way of writing and expressing it. from kevin this was a pleasure to read.
Thanks very much, Kevin! I appreciate you visiting and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I hope you’ll visit again~
Ahhh, the moment when a kiss is more than a kiss. It sends an exhilarating rush through the body and fills the love hole in the heart. Beautiful writing my friend
Yes, how special a kiss can be…thanks so much for your kind words, Scott!
Excellent Lauren. ive nominated u for a blog award. to accept click here
Wow, Arjun, I am surprised, yet, honored and so grateful that you have been enjoying my poetry! Thanks so much for this nomination; I really appreciate it! It’s been great getting to know you through our poetry and look forward to more reading! 🙂
oh, that’s so romantic… 😉
Thanks, Nanda! 🙂
To be able to capture those romantic moments again. Thanks Lauren; it’s so nice to refind romance if only through poetry.
Thanks, Sandra, I’m glad you enjoyed this. It was a new approach for me~
Ummm…so so romantic…
Thanks so much for visiting! I’ll be over your way soon! 🙂
Very lovely poem, captures a moment in time and describes it so vividly. Your rhymes flow naturally, never feel forced. Well done!
Thank you very much, Ray! I really appreciate your kind words and feedback!