Unfamiliar Territory – Haiku On April 17, 2012 By Baydreamer - Lauren ScottIn Haiku, Life Ever-changing life The unknown beyond our sight Advance with fervor © LScott 2012 Rate this:Thank you for sharing. 💗EmailTweetShare on TumblrLike this:Like Loading...
Coming from you, Eve, that means a lot! Your writing is beyond brilliant, so thank you so much! xo April 21, 2012 at 5:27 am Reply
We always do don’t we! We will always go strong and lift others on the way! April 17, 2012 at 3:50 pm Reply
Beautiful Haiku Lauren thats how life should be embraced thats how life should be sung hugs n love 🙂 April 17, 2012 at 4:18 pm Reply
Thanks, Soma, and also for your insightful comment! Love and hugs to you, too! xo April 21, 2012 at 5:28 am Reply
you say unfamiliar territory but i think you got it perfect.. It’s amazing..i really loved it…:-) April 17, 2012 at 4:23 pm Reply
Awww…thanks, Abi, that means a lot to me…I’ll see you soon. I’m sorry for my absence, I can’t seem to stay caught up! xo 🙂 April 21, 2012 at 5:30 am Reply
A lovely Haiku, Lauren; I like the sense of wonder and adventure; striking out with fervor to greet something new and unknown. Well done! ~ Julie 🙂 xox April 17, 2012 at 6:43 pm Reply
in 3 short lines you’ve given us an instruction manual! Excellent Lauren! xoxox April 17, 2012 at 10:19 pm Reply
Oh, thanks, Jeannie, that is a BIG complement and I thank you again! Hugs! xo April 21, 2012 at 5:37 am Reply
So much told in so little words yet every word telling a story Enjoyed that Aussie Ian aka Emu April 18, 2012 at 7:12 am Reply
Excellent haiku from an optimist’s point of view, thanks for posting this Lauren, God bless your poetic heart 🙂 April 18, 2012 at 10:24 am Reply
I am enjoying reading your words of enlightenment and encouragement. April 18, 2012 at 12:28 pm Reply
This is lovley as always, Lauen! You always write about wonderful things. Hugs, xx April 19, 2012 at 10:21 am Reply
Yes, Lauren, let us charge into the unknown together with all fervor! So glad to have the gift of your haikus again here! April 19, 2012 at 7:12 pm Reply
No matter what lies ahead, we must continue and not let anything keep us from living life to its fullest!! Andrea XOXOXO April 22, 2012 at 3:13 pm Reply
Thanks, Betty, but I have to be honest and say that this isn’t my first…I’ve written close to forty~ 🙂 April 23, 2012 at 2:42 pm Reply
There can be no better substitute for courage–far rarer than we’d like–than fervor! A grand plan indeed. 🙂 April 24, 2012 at 1:05 am Reply
Awww…thanks, David, I’m actually working on some new, but my muse is missing! 🙂 Hopefully, soon, though… April 30, 2012 at 12:40 am Reply
I like the last line. Why advance any other way?
There is no other way, right? Thanks so much!
Beautiful, like a pro! 😉
Awww…thanks, Jason, I’ll run with it, even though I am no pro! 🙂
🙂 so modest!
🙂
Your haiku are always so awesome Lauren! x
Coming from you, Eve, that means a lot! Your writing is beyond brilliant, so thank you so much! xo
We always do don’t we! We will always go strong and lift others on the way!
Yes, we do, Wendell! Thank you!
Beautiful Haiku Lauren thats how life should be embraced thats how life should be sung
hugs n love 🙂
Thanks, Soma, and also for your insightful comment! Love and hugs to you, too! xo
This is really excellent, Lauren–and a great message too.
Thanks, Caddo, Master of Poetry Forms! xo
you say unfamiliar territory but i think you got it perfect.. It’s amazing..i really loved it…:-)
Awww…thanks, Abi, that means a lot to me…I’ll see you soon. I’m sorry for my absence, I can’t seem to stay caught up! xo 🙂
I love the sense of adventure with this – so true! xoxo
Thanks very much, Sheila! 🙂 xo
A lovely Haiku, Lauren; I like the sense of wonder and adventure; striking out with fervor to greet something new and unknown. Well done! ~ Julie 🙂 xox
Thanks so much, Julie, for your awesome insight, as well! Hugs! xo
I’m going to think of this the next time I hesitate.
I hope it helps, not only you, but I need to live by my words! 🙂
in 3 short lines you’ve given us an instruction manual! Excellent Lauren! xoxox
Oh, thanks, Jeannie, that is a BIG complement and I thank you again! Hugs! xo
love this!
Thanks, Linda! xo
Optimist all the way!! 🙂
Trying to be! 🙂 Thanks, Steve!
So much told in so little words
yet every word telling a story
Enjoyed that
Aussie Ian aka Emu
Thank you so much, Ian! 🙂
Excellent haiku from an optimist’s point of view, thanks for posting this Lauren, God bless your poetic heart 🙂
Oh, thank you, Cynthia, your comment truly touches my heart! xo
Beautiful little haiku Lauren! 🙂
Thanks, Alex! I’m not getting your posts, so I’ll visit you soon! 🙂
I am enjoying reading your words of enlightenment and encouragement.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you find my poetry encouraging! 🙂
This is lovley as always, Lauen! You always write about wonderful things.
Hugs, xx
Thanks so much, Deb! Hugs for your kind words! xo
Yes, Lauren, let us charge into the unknown together with all fervor! So glad to have the gift of your haikus again here!
Thanks, Rose, yes, with fervor, here we go! 🙂 xo
So much truth packed in a few words. Lovely!
Thank you so much, Peg!
No matter what lies ahead, we must continue and not let anything keep us from living life to its fullest!!
Andrea XOXOXO
I’m glad you agree, Andrea! Thanks for your comment, too! xo
Lauren, great haiku! Can’t believe this is your first. 🙂
Thanks, Betty, but I have to be honest and say that this isn’t my first…I’ve written close to forty~ 🙂
There can be no better substitute for courage–far rarer than we’d like–than fervor! A grand plan indeed. 🙂
So well said, too, Kathryn! 🙂
hope you write many many more
David in Maine USA
Awww…thanks, David, I’m actually working on some new, but my muse is missing! 🙂 Hopefully, soon, though…