How many minutes ticked away
since life was rearranged
and the pattern of breathing
was beautifully changed?
How many hours slipped away
since skies merged by design,
vanishing everything around
with no measure of time?
From the shimmering heavens
the moon smiles so brightly,
witnessing two lonely hearts
softly colliding sublimely.
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Aww 🥰 🥹
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and what a beautiful collision
Aww, thanks, Beth. 🥰
Your words evoke a sense of timelessness and a beautiful connection between hearts under the moonlit sky. Lovely poem Lauren. ❤
Hi Suma, thanks so much for your lovely comment, and I’m glad you loved this bit of romance. 🩷
My pleasure 🤗❤
How touching, Lauren. Beautiful sentiment. 💖
Thanks, Kaye. I appreciate your lovely words. 💞
Lauren, this is a beautiful reflection that I feel so vividly portrays that liminal space you’ve recently written of experiencing with your family. 🙏
What a beautiful comment, Steve, that I appreciate very much. 🥰🙏🏻
Thank you, Lauren, and you are very welcome. 🙏🏼
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Awesome 👏👏
Thank you! ❤️🙏🏻
What is not to enjoy in your beautiful poetry Lauren… Another great Poem my friend ❤
Aww, thanks, Sue. This poem is a revised oldie, so I’m glad you enjoyed it. Have a lovely Sunday, my friend. xoxo
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I love how the simplicity of this poem lends to its beautiful rhythm and powerful message! ❤
Thanks for your lovely and insightful comment, Layla. 🩷
Beautiful
Thanks, Sadje. 💖🙏🏻
You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
Lauren this is such a beautiful poem ❤️
Thanks so much, Maggie. I’m happy you enjoyed these words of romance. 🥰💖
My pleasure Lauren 🥰🌹
Couldn’t have said it better myself.
Thanks, Anneli! That’s kind of you! 🥰
Wonderful!
Thanks, Barb! 🩷🙏🏻
…as sublime are your words, my dearest friend!
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Aww, you’re so kind, Marina! Thank you! Hugs again coming your way! 🙂 🧡🍁🧡🍁🧡🎃👻
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wonderfully written poem, sometimes time indeed can’t be measured
Thanks very much, Brother Love! 😁
A lovely romantic poem. 🙂
Thanks, Liz! I’m glad you enjoyed this one! 🙂
You’re welcome, Lauren.
Absolutely beautiful
You are so gifted with your words
Thanks so much, Ian! That’s kind of you to say. 🙏🏻
The first stanza captivated me – had to read it several times before I could move. One to be memorized, most certainly! Beautiful poem, Lauren. ❤️
Thanks for your lovely words, Michele. I’m happy to know the first verse drew you in. I haven’t shared any romance lately, so I’m glad you enjoyed this. 💞
Beautiful poem. Beautiful use of words and imagery Lauren
Thanks so much, Brian. I appreciate your wonderful comment. Have a good Monday!
I’m in awe of poets like yourself and an others on WP. It’s stringing words together to express meaning and emotion. I get that, but it takes it to a new level beyond simple prose. Anyway, beautiful work.
You’re so kind, Brian, and I appreciate your encouraging words. You have a knack for writing about everyday life that makes your readers think, and you do it well, adding that dash of entertaining humor. 😁
Thanks Lauren, I’m not sure what my knack is … I definitely like writing about everyday life. Poetry is definitely different for me. It’s one where I admire from afar! Ha ha.
Time slips by no matter what we’re doing.
Very true, Binky. 🙂
❤️️Such a beautiful and meaningful poem, Lauren.
Thanks for your beautiful words, Eugi. I appreciate them. 🩷
My pleasure, Lauren.
Wow fantastic story so serene and light to read Lauren. Lovely 🌹🌹🌹
Thanks so much, Kamal! Have a wonderful day, my friend. ❤️🌻
You are always welcome dear Lauren. You too have a great day ♥️👌♥️
Your poetry is always so beautiful ❤️
Aww, thanks so much, Pooja. I appreciate your kind words. 🩷
You’re very welcome.
Wonderful!
I actually do have a Goodreads account!
My review is up on Kobo! If it’s okay with you, I’ll copy into Goodreads?
🎃xo🎃
Thanks, Resa, and are you kidding? 🙂 Of course, you can post your review on Goodreads! I’m happy dancing and can’t wait to see it there! I saw it on Kobo, so thank you! I really appreciate all the support you’ve given me with ESG. Huge hugs! 🧡🎃🤗🍁
Huge Hugs!!! 🎃𝖃 😈⧗
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Beautiful Lauren, I love your way with words. Hugs, C
Thanks so much, Cheryl! I always appreciate your words! 🙂 And if you get the chance to read my book, I hope you enjoy the collection. Have fun on your travels and book signing adventure too! I’m excited for you! Hugs and Happy Halloween! 🧡🎃👻
I loved this Lauren. I felt like two souls were reconnecting in a better world. ❤
I’m glad you loved this poem, Debby. It’s a revised oldie. Thank you! 🩷
Hugs ❤
I love your insightful words and your beautiful poem, Lauren. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for your lovely words, Miriam! They are greatly appreciated. 🩷💐
You’re welcome, Lauren! 😍😊
Beautiful poem!
Thank you! 🌷
You’re welcome!
This is such a lovely poem, Lauren.
Well done, Lauren.
Thanks, Mark!