In your eyes
I see star speckled
azure seas and
calm ocean waves
and soft snowflakes
grand, green meadows
linger for hours
In your eyes
I see a
of vivid colors
and the moonlight glow
makes me thankful
You’re my beau
I can tell you today
but I’d rather get lost
and drift away
© LScott 2012
63 thoughts on “When I look…”
This rings so true – we see all of God’s gifts in the eyes of a loved one.
Thanks, Eric, and you said it beautifully, too, and I’m so sorry your comments were in my spam, but thank you so much for reminding me! I don’t understand why they were, but then again, I don’t understand everything about WP! Hugs and blessings to you~
Dear Lauren – don’t worry yourself about the spam. These glitches happen. I’ve had regular commentators end up in my spam folder – ah, technology 🙂
Kinda late over there, I reckon. A great big hug for you from Singapore.
Okay, thanks, Eric, I feel much better now! And it’s not too late, only close to 10pm! Hugs back! 🙂
So pure and refreshing.
Thank you so much, Spiderfarmmanager! I appreciate your kind words! 🙂
Oh beauty, what a beautiful dream life becomes when one finds their soul mate..
bless you Lauren what a lovely poetry
Thanks so much, Soma, for your ever so beautiful comment! Hugs to you, too! xo
I would like to sing it to someone, one day…. 🙂
Thanks so much, Shobhan! What a lovely complement! 🙂
nice Lauren! : )
Thanks, J! Hope you’re doing well; I’ve missed you! 🙂
🙂 aww… thanks. That’s good to know! sending you a hug. I have missed you and your beautiful writing as well but as for as how I am doing… I am great. Thanks for asking! Things are starting off good so far this year Lauren. How are you? I hope all is well. : )
Lovely romance, Lauren!! And here’s something: more awards for you (may be repeats)–come see me!!
Thanks, Caddo, and I’ll be over later! Can’t wait! 🙂
This is so romantic! 🙂 Lovely! Only in a beloved one’s eyes you can see all this!
Thank you so much, Ina! I truly appreciate your visit and kind words! 🙂
beautifully romantic and as lovely written as always .
Thanks, as always, Francina! Your support is great appreciated! xx
Thats lovely Lauren. I read it to my wife, who then said why don’t I write that to her instead of my obsession with history……… my reply, “only a true beauty can write beauty” 🙂
Thank you, John, for your very kind words! And, you are too funny; please write something for your wife! 🙂
I will stick to plagiarism, a poet me? 🙂
Very beautiful Lauren!
Thanks so much, David!
Aah, I love this one!
Thanks, Dianda, I’m so glad you liked this mushy one! 🙂
It’s just a beautiful poem, I love it 🙂
Thanks, Autumn, I know you like “mushy” too! 🙂
How very romantic, Lauren! I love it!
Love and Hugs, xx
Thanks, Deb, I’m glad you liked the romance, too! xoxo
How romantic. Amazing how eye contact can do that…
Thanks, Christy, yes, it is amazing! 🙂
Wonderfully effective poem to show how all the things we treasure most in this earthly life are reflected in the eyes of the beloved, because they also treasure those same things–true soulmates!
I couldn’t have said it better, Rose! Thank you! 🙂
So beautifully romantic and so loving. I am so happy you are with your soulmate Lauren and long may you love! 🙂
Awww…thank you so much, Gabby, for your very sweet comment…
The beauties that you captured in your poem, brought an awesome number of smiles to find a home on my face… a jewel of a poem…thanks for sharing!
Thanks so much, Wendell, for your lovely comment and I’m glad my words made you smile~
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Awww…George, thank you so much! I’m honored that you thought of me! I’m heading over your way now! Thanks again! 🙂
Oh the wonder and contentment of getting lost in someone’s eyes — especially when it’s reciprocated.
Yes, you captured that moment, too, with your beautiful comment, Sandra, thank you!
Thanks, Betty! 🙂
that’s true love i sense in here… 🙂
Yep, it is! Thanks, Nanda! 🙂
to see into and through the open soul and love through the eyes of your beloved, so beautifully expressed, Lauren. Your Love does seem to even transcend mortal vows and find itself in a deeper sphere of the eternal, one that can open to the portals of Love which is beyond the known. The eyes are the entry to the soul, and only the eternal can pass through as you do. You would never be lost, merely taken into a journey of your soulmates Love and eternal Light. I think it a Blessing. Love, Linda
I’m in awe of your comment, Linda, so beautifully expressed, as well. Thank you so much for your kindness~love and hugs to you!
Very lovely romantic poem ‘I’d rather get lost
and drift away’ what a lovely thought.
Thanks so much, Indira~ xx
Such a beautiful poem Lauren! I love it! Kudos! God Bless 🙂
Thanks, again, PJ, I’m glad you liked this mushy one, too! 🙂
As always Lauren, you manifest emotions beautifully on paper (well, laptop!). God bless your team – soul-mate & you! Hug.
Awww…Shaheen, thank you for your ever so kind comment to my hubby and I and about my poem~That’s very sweet~ Hugs to you, too!
Ohh I loved it… its very romantic…. ( my world in your eyes!)
Thanks, Arch, I’m so glad you enjoyed this bit of romance~
So beautiful Lauren! Your awesome poetry is helping me fill the gap in my soul during my own lack of inspirations 🙂
Awww…thank you, Scott, you are so encouraging and I appreciate it! And I’m sure somewhere deep inside, you’ll find that inspiration again…I miss reading your wonderful writing and I know I’m not alone! 🙂
Thank you for sharing something so sweet 🙂
Thank you very much, Ami, and I appreciate your visit and follow! I’m behind on reading posts, but will soon be over your way! 🙂
Beautiful Lauren!! Blessings and hugs to you, my friend xox
Thanks, Dennis, and I appreciate your visit.