Desire for you
begins to grow
as the sun
begins its descent,
flaming the sky red
and burning parts
of it orange
I long for your warmth,
along my skin
and kiss me
reeling me in
I want your body
to be a part of mine
you’ll kiss me again
with weak knees
Desire for you
33 thoughts on “Sunset”
My my my! 😦
Meant happy smile sorry with typo
I knew what you mean, PJ! 🙂
wow, incredibly amazing, I love the flow of words and honestly i can say now it’s good we have the word …. LOVE …. 😉
Aww…thanks so much, Lane, and yes, LOVE, is very much involved! 😉
These words need to be felt to be written so beautifully and you obviously feel it strongly Lauren! Another wonderful poem ❤ xxxHBL
What a beautiful thing to say, Chris, and you are very right, too! 🙂 Thanks, my friend! HBL xoxox ♥
Someone is very much in love,I wonder who. 😀
I wonder, too? 🙂 Thanks for commenting, Audrina!
Great sensual poem Lauren
Thanks so much, Al! 🙂
Your words will sweep any heart away! Excellent poem Lauren and so beautifully written! Hugs and blessings always!
Thanks, Wendell, for your beautiful complement! Hugs and blessings to you, too!
excellent and passionate poem, Lauren!
love and hugs from across the creek xoxo
Thanks, Francina, you are too kind, my friend! Sending love and hugs to you, also, across the little creek! 🙂 xoxoxo
Beautiful poem, Lauren!!! 🙂 As alwayyys.
Hope you’ve had a great weekend!
Thanks very much, Cha! The weekend was great and now another Monday has come and gone…have a great week, my friend! Hugs!
Oh how romantic!! ❤
Thanks so much, Christy! You know me! 😉 xox
I’m not sure how you manage to write in a way that feels sensual and romantic without even a hint of seedy – but you do! Love it x
What a wonderful complement, Pooky, thanks so much! I’m happy you enjoyed this one! xx
I’ve started to really look forward to seeing your poems pop up in my stream! x
Thank you! xx
🙂 🙂 🙂
Happy to bring smiles, Sandy! 🙂
I especially love these lines – “You whisper/ sweet touches/ along my skin” – beautiful.
Thanks so much, Sheila! I’m humbled by your lovely comment! xxx
Ooooh, Lauren – a most sweet and sensuous poem. (I like it! 🙂 )
Aww..thanks, Betty, glad you liked this bit of sexy romance! 😉 Thanks for all your visits today, too! xx
Lovely and sensuous I think I went weak at the knees reading 😉 lol,,, Have a wonderful Evening, and weekend
Aww..thanks so much, Sue, I’m glad this had the right effect! 🙂 lol And wishing you the same! xoxo