As sure as leaves will fall
at season’s change
and rain will drop
as clouds rearrange
I have fallen through new doors opened
the key I thought was lost forever
you have found so cleverly
the lock had suffered
yet, not broken for eternity~
© LScott 2012
(for new beginnings)
Lauren, this is quite a poetic achievement for you. You are breaking into new ground a little bit here. I am anticipating much more expansion along these lines in the next weeks and months. “fallen through new doors” and “the lock had suffered” are examples of this type of fresh thinking.
Thanks so much, Rose, for your “teaching” skills! I adore you! I’m behind again on reading and we’re fostering a new doggie (today) to adopt , so time will be less on the blog, but I’ll catch up with your journey; please don’t give up on me! Hugs and love~
I was thinking the same thing!
Thanks, Bond, for your comment and feedback! It’s always appreciated! 🙂
What a beauty, Lauren! Yes, I agree with the poem (as if you need my agreement!! lol!), seriously, the poem is like the soothing coolness of morning dew, my friend. Keep penning….the ‘blood-ink’ likes your pen, or feather, or laptop keys! Cheers.
Shaheen, you are too kind, truly! Thank you so much and your words are very encouraging. Right now, time is limited for blogging, so I’m far behind, but will visit you soon this week. Have a wonderful, peaceful day, my friend!~ xo
Very topical and very beautiful, Lauren. Thank Heaven for spring… in the northern hemisphere anyway!
Thank you so much, David; well, today, it’s pouring! So much for spring, but it’s just around the corner! Have a wonderful day~
Beautifully written x
Thank you so much and for your visit!
what a beauty Lauren, for every winter there is a spring…
lovely poem of love n hope
hugs n love 🙂
Thank you, Soma, your words are always so loving and make my day! Love and hugs back to you! xo
A damaged heart, a damaged lock… both fixable, as life continues on as do the changing seasons. 😀
Thanks for stopping by, Steve, and for your insight to my poem…very lovely~ 🙂
It’s an awesome poem, Lauren. So beautiful. Thanks for sharing 🙂
Thanks so much, Rajkishore! You’re always so kind and it’s greatly appreciated! Have a wonderful day! I’m very behind on reading blogs, but will visit you soon! 🙂
What a beautiful poem Honey.
Love You, Matt
Lauren, I have to go with the first two comments–this is BIG and Good!! It’s lovely and speaks to my heart.
Thanks, Caddo, we’re getting a new doggie today to foster, then adopt if we love him…so time is limited for now. I will visit you soon, but I’m so excited! Love and hugs! xo
Oh how wonderful Lauren! You write so well about love xx
Oh, thanks, Christie, you are so kind! Hope you’re well; I’ve been absent a little and time is limited right now..hugs to you! xo
I understand Lauren, take care of yourself and take time to rest. Hugs back
Beautiful as always Lauren! Such a pleasure to read. 🙂
Thanks so much, Eve, I value your feedback! xo
I love it! Linda
Thanks, Linda, I’m glad you liked this one! xo
Your poems always make me smile – thank you
Thanks, Sheila, I’m glad I can bring a smile to your day! xo
Hey Lauren,
I’ve nominated you on a Very Inspiring Blogger Award. Read here, http://bluefiadiarries.wordpress.com/2012/03/24/very-inspiring-blogger-award-another/ for details. 🙂
Fia
Thank you so much, Blue! I’m honored you thought of me for this wonderful award! Time is limited for me right now, so it will take awhile to follow through, but thank you very much again! xo
you’re very welcome Lauren. Take your time, we aren’t in a hurry,are we? Hehe. xoxo
beautiful poem and so in tune with the season. love it Ciao, Francina xx
Thanks, Francina, you’re always so kind! And yes, but it’s pouring here! Well, I know spring is around the corner! 🙂 xx
Very pretty, gentle and apropos as the earth comes back to life and we all have a chance at renewal . . .
Thanks, Kathryn! xx
This is beautiful, Lauren. These lines are especially soul catching :-):
as clouds rearrange
I have fallen through new doors opened
– just gorgeous!
Thanks, dear Angela, coming from you, I am truly humbled by your beautiful comment! xo
This is a great poem, very cute! 🙂
Thank you so much! 🙂
to find the key can be so key
for unlocking doors of true happiness ….
please try not to lose that key if you can Lauren :o)
Jimi
JImi, thanks for your comment, but regarding the key to happiness, this is fiction. I’m happily married for 23 years and have a wonderful son and daughter. This is for those who are starting again, as we all have at some point in our lives…again, thanks for stopping by! 🙂
Hi Lauren,
This poem is lovely….you have such a knack for words. It is beautiful!
I know I haven’t been around much lately. We just got on the Island last Thursday with lots of work here that was waiting for us….but we’re getting there. I had to stop to come visit you special today though…why? because it’s your birthday! Happy Birthday, my dear friend! I hope your day is fill with love and laughter!…Once again, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!”
Thanks so much, Deb! And thank you for all the wonderful birthday gifts! I love them! Check out my new puppy post! xo
What a lovely poem, Lauren!!
Thanks so much, Betty! Hope you’re doing well! xo