Your kindness
glows upon my world
pulling me in
forever surreal
When you give your love
my foundation shifts
like a gentle quake
I tumble in
Tenderly
You stir my soul
as a whirlwind
out of control
With you
I travel
the road to bliss
My heart’s content
A love so real
© LScott 2012
A sweet song of vibrant love! You have lifted the heart of many several times today…leaving a hunger for more! Beautiful!
Wendell, I am humbled by your beautiful and encouraging comments. Thank you so much~
A tender, uplifting, gentle song of love, Lauren. Beautiful. ~ Julie 🙂
Thank you so much, Julie! 🙂 xx
an ode to love! very good!
Thank you, Jeannie! 🙂
I could feel my sweetheart holding me tightly when I read this!
Then I did something right! 🙂 Thanks, Kathryn!
Beautiful…!!
Thank you so much, Smilingsunshinegirl! 🙂
…:)
Lauren, I’ve really grown to love your short little ‘nuggets of light and love’, a few lines of hope. This one is no exception. Thank you.
Thank you so much, David, I appreciate your encouraging words and I’m glad you’re enjoying these little nuggets…thank you for your wonderful perspective!
Happy and uplifting, great work again Lauren! I see the poetry muse is strong for you right now 🙂
Thanks, again, Christy, I have been busy this weekend, but I think things will slow down a bit~ 🙂
Beautiful words of promise for a future of love.
Thanks, Sandra~
“You stir my soul
as a whirlwind
out of control”, these words, so beautifully written do stir me as well, I love this poem, to you, my friend, Linda
Thank you so much, Linda…I’m so glad you enjoyed this to the “stirring” point…love and hugs to you, too! xx
How blessed you are, dear Lauren, with both long-lasting true love and such poetic ability to properly celebrate it!
Thanks, Rose, you are too kind…I hope you’re enjoying your Monday! 🙂
Makes me sigh deeply with the beauty of this! 🙂
Thanks, again, Betty! 🙂
Oh what a magical love that you share, the experience of which only the voice of your soul can truly describe. 🙂 Thanks Lauren! Much blessings and love & light!!!
Thanks, again, Nadine, for your lovely reply: I truly appreciate your kindness…Blessings and hugs to you, too! 🙂
What beautiful words Lauren! You have been so blessed. hugs. 🙂
Thanks so much, Renee! 🙂 xx