You’re standing so near
using up my air supply
No feather kisses –
tingling touches on my skin
I need a moment to breathe
© Lscott 2012
Photo: Google Images
You’re standing so near
using up my air supply
No feather kisses –
tingling touches on my skin
I need a moment to breathe
© Lscott 2012
Photo: Google Images
Baydreamer ~ Lauren Scott 
We use magnets in our lab. The really strong ones, you have to be careful with, kinda like this! Good poem
Very interesting, Joe, and I’m glad you liked this, thank you! 🙂
Wonderful write Lauren as always 🙂
Thanks so much, J! 🙂
l loved this, imagine a magnet!
I’m glad you enjoyed this, Linda, thank you! Hugs!
Wow, love that takes your breath away – lovely….
Exactly, thanks so much, Kathy…(I hope I’m right with your name)… 🙂
Exactly right with the name 🙂
Amazing! Love will take your breath away!
Isn’t love wonderful when it does take our breath away? Thanks so much for your comment, Wendell~
Oh WOW, Lauren–gotta love breathless love!
I LOVE your enthusiasm, Caddo! What’s better than breathless love? 🙂 Have a great weekend! Love, L
This is very nice.
Thanks, Kim! 🙂
In these short lines, you have said a lifetime! Very lovely, dear Lauren! Hugs.
Awww…thanks, Shaheen, just something very simple, but I’m glad you enjoyed it…Hugs to you, too~
Did I ever tell you that Mom and I always thought that love would and did take our breath away!
Yes, Dad, and I will never tire of hearing your love stories about you and Mom! Love ya! xoxo
Now this is an interesting poem. A lot going on behind every one of those words. Virginia
Thanks so much, Virginia, I hope that means you liked it! 🙂
Absolutely. Your poetry is thought provoking, It is good to get those little gray cells working. Virginia
Thanks, Virginia, that’s very sweet of you! I don’t always consider mine very thought provoking, but maybe some are…as long as you enjoy them, that makes me happy!
This is just absolutely lovely. Thank you for sharing, Lauren! 🙂
Subhan Zein
Aww…thanks, Subhan, for your kind words and for stopping by! Have a great weekend, too! 🙂
Love always attracts like a magnet, and this poem is breathtaking! Hugs to you, Sis and stay well!
Exactly what I was trying to convey, Cynthia! Thank you and hugs to you, too, sis! Have a great weekend and I hope you’re doing okay…Hugs!
Reblogged this on Seasons Poetry and commented:
lovely, simply lovely . Lauren,
Ciao Francina xox
Thanks so much, Francina, I’m honored you are sharing this~hugs to you! xoxo
Breath taken with by love…I love it!
Have a beautiful day, Lauren! Hugs xoxo
Thanks so much, Deb, and the same to you! Hugs and Blessings! xoxo
Oooh, love your Tanka, Lauren! You are such a romantic (I love that about you!) … and your dad’s comment brought tears to my eyes ….. Sending you love and hugs, too! ~ Julie xoxox
Thanks, Julie, and yes, I guess I am and glad you like that part, too! Hee,hee! Thanks for the kind words about my Dad’s comment, too…that was really sweet~sending love and hugs back to you! Have a wonderful and peaceful Sunday! xoxo
Oh this was divine…..I love your creative genius and your ability to impact with such few words…..your heart is eternally young and full of purity and joy, and it shows in your words…..Loved this so much and had fun remembering my own intimate moments of breathlessness, caught up in the heady excitement of love’s allure……
Celeste
Aww…Celeste, your beautiful words are a wonderful and encouraging start to my week! Thank you so much and I know you, for sure, love romance and passion and I’m happy we both have that in our lives! Hugs to you, my friend~
Great tanka expressing the reality of too much “closeness”!
I love your description, Rose, thank you! xx
Very seductive … love this: ‘No feather kisses’!
Thanks, again, Diane, and I’m so sorry for missing your comments. I must have been in lulu land somewhere! Anyway, thanks for your visits and I’m sending you hugs! xo