How long has it been
Since my life was rearranged
And the pattern of my breathing
Was drastically changed?
How many minutes have ticked away
Since your sky merged into mine
And all that surrounds me has vanished
With no measure of time?
In the vast darkness way up high
We find shelter under the moon
In our hearts, minds, and souls
We find ourselves marooned
(a little bit of romance)
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I had such a hard job getting into your page today. Glad I was able to. another fine poem.
I wonder why, Ian, but WordPress can be tricky sometimes. 🙂 I appreciate you stopping by and also for your kind words…
You have been groomed for the present.
What you feel , your being.. body, mind and soul.
Thanks for sharing another brilliant poem.
Aww, thanks, Maureen, for your lovely comment. Hugs to you, too, and have a great weekend! ♥
That was very nice!
Thanks so much, Binky! Have a good weekend with the Wombies! (and lots of chocolate, too!) 🙂
I was a little apprehensive with the first stanza but then things became clearer and sweeter. ❤
You’re right; there could be two different meanings in the first stanza, which I didn’t notice because I was in the sappy romance mode while writing it. 🙂 Thanks for your comment and visit!
There is nothing sappy about romance, Lauren. A lovely romantic poem. Hugs
Thanks, Michelle! We can’t have enough romance, right? 😊 Hugs to you and have a great day! 💕
Always beautiful Lauren…always! God bless!
Thanks, Wendell, it’s so nice to see you here. I hope all is well with you and your family! Blessings!