I wish you could feel
the words I hold in my heart
tender to the touch in
a part of me for only you
I wish you could taste
the words in my mouth
sense their passion
and meet me later
under the blanket of stars
Lauren Scott © 2015
I wish you could feel
the words I hold in my heart
tender to the touch in
a part of me for only you
I wish you could taste
the words in my mouth
sense their passion
and meet me later
under the blanket of stars
Lauren Scott © 2015
Lauren – I don’t know what to tell you – I cried reading those wonderful and powerful words!
Enjoy the clip from Italy!!
Aww, thank you, Mihran, for being so touched by my poem, which warms my heart and thanks so much for sending me this video. I have to tell you that my speakers aren’t working right now, but they should be fixed today or tomorrow. I’ll let you know when I’ve listened to your beautiful song…take care and have a wonderful day!
“I wish you could taste the words in my mouth”
Wow!
I so much like that line.
Thanks, Teecee! I think that’s one of my favorites, too, after reading it when I finished. 🙂 Glad you enjoyed!
Beautiful words Lauren – Looking forward to reading more and checking out your book. Thanks for sharing with us. Hope your evening is most beautiful…
Michael
Thanks so much, Michael, for your kind words, visit and future support to my book. I appreciate them all and will visit you soon, too! Have a great week!
Very romantic!
Thanks, Binky! You know me! 🙂
Beautifully enchanting Lauren!
Aww, thanks so much, Wendell!
What a talent you have in expression. Well done!
What a complement that is, Ian, thank you very much!
Breathtaking.
Thanks so much, Jean!
It’s always so much fun to read how you put out your emotions and passion in your words.
Blessings,
-Naima
What a nice thing to say, Naima, thanks so much! Blessings to you, too…
Beautiful! 🙂
Thanks, Iris! Have a good week ahead! ♥
You too! ♡
Your words shine so beautifully bright when they find themselves nestled in the romance stanzas of your poetry Lauren. Just beautiful ❤️
Aww, thanks, Angela, and I love how you weave together such beautiful comments, too! Sending love and hugs…
Stirring is your beautiful poem, my dear Lauren! 🙂 Have a beautiful new week. xx
Thanks so much, Marina, for your lovely complement and I wish you a wonderful week ahead, too! xoxo
Beautifully passionate Lauren and at the same time so gentle. 😊 xx
Thanks so much, Chris, for your lovely words, as always…:) ♥
Beautiful!
Thanks, Stefan! 🙂
Just the kind of lines that will inspire one to strum the guitar and start singing it…
What a beautiful thought, Raj, thanks so much for your lovely comment!
Beautiful poem throughout, but that second stanza really got me. Awesome Lauren!
Thanks again, Scott, and I think I felt the same way after seeing the words on paper the first time. 🙂
Awww, so wonderful.
Thanks so much, Shian! Your comments are always truly appreciated! ♥
Awestruck.
Aww, thank you! 🙂
Honey, I love this poem and I’m so blessed to have you as my wife! Love you! M
So exquisitely tender and fragile!
Aww, thank you so much for your beautiful comment and it’s nice to see you!
Beautiful poem!. Thanks for sharing… All my best wishes and happy week ahead, Aquileana 😀
Thanks so much, Aquileana, for your lovely words. I wish you a wonderful week ahead, too, and as you know, I’m always late in visiting, but I will be in your world soon! 🙂 ♥
Blanket of stars! What a beautiful phrase! It’s nice to read your words again…
Thanks so much, Chatty, and it’s nice to see you again. Hope you’re doing well! 🙂
Tender, simple expression of love, Lauren. Would make a nice Valentine’s gift.
Thanks very much, Victoria; what a nice thought!
Lauren, this is gorgeous! “I wish you could feel the words I hold in my heart” – that is love!
Aww, thanks for such a beautiful comment, Michelle. I’m glad you liked this touch of romance…
very romantic and evocative. 🙂
Thanks, Geraldine! ♥
That’s the grandeur of poetry, a handful of powerful words … heart,tender,passion,stars … in the hands of a talented poetess ! You stirred up the strongest feelings in my heart,dearest Lauren!
Thank you for that ; have a wonderful day,Doda:-) ❤ xxx
What a lovely comment, Doda, thank you so much! You have warmed my heart for the day! 🙂 Wishing you a wonderful day, too, and it’s almost Friday! ♥ xo
Beautiful tender and romantic words Lauren.
Your words let a small tear fall from my heart.
Ian
Aww, thanks, Ian, and I hope that tear isn’t of sadness…
I don’t even know what to say.
Absolutely loved it! ❤
Thank you very much! I’m glad you did! ♥
Beautiful Lauren… your words bring my own tastes buds wanting more.. x
Aww, thanks, Sue! I hope you’re doing well! I’m so behind on reading it’s ridiculous! 🙂 Big hugs and have a great weekend! ♥
I am fine Lauren…. Big Hugs xxx I too am way behind.. x
Feeling and tasting the words instead of just hearing…