Your kindness
glows upon my world
pulling me into
forever surreal
When you give your love
my foundation shifts
like a gentle quake
I tumble in
Tenderly
you stir my soul
as a whirlwind
out of control
With you
I travel
the road to bliss
my heart’s content
a love so real
Lauren Scott © 2012
(This is from two years ago,
so I hope you don’t mind
reading it again, if you’ve
already seen it.) ♥
You write really amazing poetry. You’re so in love. 🙂
Aww, thanks, Shian, your words warm my heart and it’s nice to feel this way after over two decades of being together. 🙂
Awww. Yes it is. You were made for each other.
Thanks! ♥
That was lovely! Nicely done!
Thanks very much, Joe! Have a good day!
Lovely work, Lauren,
Thanks, Jean! Have a good day!
If I read it, I don’t remember it, but sure love it now…..beautiful, Lauren! xoxo
Aww, thanks, Deb! I don’t remember all that I write myself, so I keep hard copies of them all! 🙂 Have a wonderful Wednesday, my friend! xoxo
That’s very nice.
I’m happy you think so, Binky! 🙂
“my heart’s content.” I guess we as humans are social beings and kindness and attention brings contentment doesn’t it?
I would have to say that it does, Ian…thanks, always, for your wonderful comments!
full of hope and faith.
Thanks so much, Soumyav! ♥
Beautiful and Romantic, I sense a heart of deep love in those words Lauren.
My first read.
Emu aka Ian
Thanks for your lovely words, Ian, and yes, after 25 years, there still remains deep love for my hubby. (and his heart is the same for me) 🙂 Have a great day, my friend!
Sublime as always, like the waters of the river that flow serenely and calmly into the ocean of life!
Aww, thanks, Rodrick! Your comments are always so beautiful and poetic! Wishing you a happy day!
Lauren, this is so beautiful and full of hope.
Thanks so much, Michelle! Sometimes, it’s fun to read some oldies and share again when the muse is vacationing. 🙂 Have a wonderful Wednesday!
I love it Lauren!
Thanks so much, Scott! Have a good day!
Beautiful Lauren! And I havent seen this one before 😊❤️ Xxx
Thanks so much, Chris, and I’m glad it was a first for you! 🙂 Hugs! ♥
I’m smiling now as love is so magical! It also warms my heart that you are in love with hubby so much 😀
I’m happy to make you smiling, my friend, and I feel blessed that we still feel the same after over two decades together…not bragging, just blessed. 🙂 Sending hugs!
This is lovely, Lauren!
Thanks so much, Iris! ♥
Beautiful, as always, Lauren. I don’t remember this one from two years ago. Glad to read it again. (((Hugs))), Peg
Thanks so much, Peg, and I’m glad it was a first! Hugs back to you! ♥ By the way, I don’t always remember my poems, which is why I keep hard copies. 🙂
Me, too, Lauren! I have a book I copy all my poems into–a sort of journal. It’s one of my prized possessions. All your poems are so beautiful, I’m sure you must have a special place for them, too. 🙂
so touching and inspiring too. 🙂 thanks Lauren.
Thank YOU, my friend, for your lovely comment! ♥
Still beautiful. ☆
Aww, thanks, Kim! xo
Truly beautiful Lauren 🙂
Thanks so much, Madhu! ♥
I’ve missed your poetry so much!!!!!
Thanks so much, my friend…you can stop by anytime and I’ll be over your way soon! 🙂
trembling
~
sensations
like a whirlwind
out of control
🙂
I love the deffusing rays of Love evading every inky cloud and spreading dazzling glow of happiness over the soul … Poignant poetic words and verses bearing ” Your ” signature dear Lauren ! Yes, Love’s Decree ;I live to love and be loved … Blessings and hugs , Doda xxx
Thanks so much for your beautiful words and visit, Doda! Wishing you a lovely weekend, too, my friend! Hugs! ♥
Your poem expresses a special love so lyrically and sensually. Beautiful, Lauren! XO ❤
Thanks for your beautiful words, Diane! I hope you’re enjoying your weekend, too! Steph is visiting so it’s always nice to have both kids around. 🙂 ♥ xo