Rain pours in droves
clearing the drain
to my unhappiness
the air is fresh
I inhale the
fragrance of hope
my heart
resumes beating
and my lips
form a smile
again
LScott © 2013
Rain pours in droves
clearing the drain
to my unhappiness
the air is fresh
I inhale the
fragrance of hope
my heart
resumes beating
and my lips
form a smile
again
LScott © 2013
Baydreamer ~ Lauren Scott 
The poem is very nice. It describes the wonderful feeling of the time it rains. Awesome!
Thank you very much, Tapasmirc, for your kind comment!
Beautiful!
Thanks so much, Iris, I couldn’t sleep last night and these thoughts came to mind! 🙂 I’ll be over to visit you soon, too!
The rain has to come to wash away problems.
I think it can be very cleansing! 🙂
It can. Especially the great globules of summer rain
Metaphorically interesting. The rain brings in positivity.
Thanks, Uzo, and yes, I feel that rain can be cleansing and have a positive effect…:)
Rain is very cleansing, seems we are all getting a bath of late… xx
Yes it can and I know many are getting a bath; right now, it’s sunny here, but we get our share! Thanks for all your visits, Sue! Hugs!
Long may the Sun Shine…. We have another wet day, but the ground is in need as we have had a really nice Summer for a change… Last year in the UK it rained nearly all through Spring Summer and Autumn…. and then we had the coldest Winter on record for a long while… So we can not grumble..
Thank you for your most welcome visits Lauren.. ~Sue
I love the smell of the rain and inhaling it or letting it pour out will eventually cause those smiles.
I agree, Sheila, thanks for commenting!
Love this, Lauren! Especially the opening. XO ♥
Thanks, Diane, this came to me at around 2:30 this morning, when I couldn’t sleep! 🙂 xoxo ♥
Got to be good news, surely. 🙂
Definitely, thanks, Ben! 🙂
Your poems always make me smile Lauren…thanks!
Thanks, Wendell, I’m happy knowing you’re smiling when you leave here! 🙂
Nothing like a little rain to clear the air!!!
Exactly, thanks, Joe, and have a great weekend! 🙂
Fragrance of hope… how beautiful!
Thanks so much, Chatty, have a lovely weekend!
You too darling! x
Bring on the smiles!! 🙂
Always! Thanks, Christy, and have a great weekend!
Hope expressed beautifully.
Thanks so much, Kim! xx
Beautiful Lauren; I can almost smell the rain!❤ Xx
Thanks, Chris, there is something soothing about the rain, isn’t there? Until it stays too long, that is! 🙂 HBL ♥
Waters from the heavens – cleansing, invigorating – sowing hope, and giving life
Thanks, Eric, for sharing your additional thoughts…
Beautiful~ ♥
Thanks, my friend! Hugs! ♥
This is really quite beautiful!♥ That feeling of everything that was bad being washed away – one of the very best feelings in life!! 🙂
Thanks so much, Suzy, and that’s exactly it…all the bad washed away, that’s the soothing part of the rain. 🙂