My mind won’t rest
with you in my dreams
and the breeze outside
my window
singing a wistful tune
under the spell
of the moon
and when I wake
at dawn
you rise with the sun
you’re in everything
I do
and all that’s been
done in my day
Oh, how I’m missing you
LScott © 2013
Lovely…
Thanks, Lindy!
Love the line: ‘You rise with the sun.’ Very poignant but highlights to me the extent to which ‘presence’ means so, so much.
Wonderful perspective, Jean, thank you for sharing and for your comment!
I can certainly relate to this beautiful piece.
I’m sure many can relate and thanks so much, Tric, for your beautiful complement!
Beautiful!
Thank you, Justme! xx
Awesome again Lauren
Thanks very much, Alastair!
Glad to read you again… your tenderness has been missed..
Peace & Light
Aww…thanks, Mira, and you have been missed, too. I’m always behind on reading blogs, but I will visit you soon. xxx
Very nice work! 🙂
Thanks so much, Charlene! 🙂
That’s lovely! Nice to hear your voice!
Thanks, Joe, I’m still not sure about my voice, but I’ll probably try again!
Oh, Lauren!! I love it. It’s even better when you read it. 🙂
Beautiful voice!!
xxx
Aww…thanks, Cha. you are too kind! I’m still “iffy” on doing this! 🙂 But, thank you! Hugs!
Your words speak to the soul and then your voice speaks to the heart!
🙂
Such a beautiful comment…thanks very much, Marina! xx
Straight from your heart, Lauren, and lovely! XO ♥
Thanks, always, Diane, for your encouraging words! xoxo ♥
awesome Lauren and you do have a great voice for audios. If you publish a book you can record an audio version as well 🙂
Thanks so much, Scott, and I’m not quite sure about an audio book, yet. I’m still just playing around on SoundCloud and getting used to hearing my voice. It’s going to take some time, I think! 🙂
Love it, Lauren. 🙂
Thanks, Dianda! 🙂 Have a great weekend!
You too! 😀
love it Lauren. Beautiful words. ♥
Thanks, Renee! Have a great weekend! ♥
Beautiful Lauren!
This poem could also be a prayer on the days when we feel we are wandering away off track 🙂
❤ HBL XX
Thanks, Chris, what a beautiful comment, my friend! HBL to you, too! ♥ xoxo
Love your voice! Love your poem … wonderful combination here, Lauren. So much to enjoy! With much affection dear friend. 🙂 xo
Thank you, thank you, my friend! This was definitely fun to try! Happy Saturday and thanks for all your visits! xoxo ♥