In your eyes
I’m swept away
as the trees swayed
to light our way
and I realize
will never again turn gray
Then you stand near me
your arms open wide
You let me in your heart
and the Heavens sighed
You made me a part of
your everyday life
as your lover, your friend,
Your beloved wife
© LScott 2012
50 thoughts on “A Promise Everlasting”
Ohhhhh… “and the Heavens sighed” …. just gorgeous, Lauren xo
Thanks so much, Angela…I always love to read your feedback, since you are an expert at creating sighs with your beautiful words~xo
Indeed, I could easily fall in love if I meet a guy could write poetry this well.
Thank you so much! 🙂
BEAUTIFUL LAUREN …..XX
Thanks, Cat! xx
Have a wonderful weekend, Cat! Hugs! 🙂
Oh, this is just beautiful! I agree, “heaven sighed.”
Thanks, Deb! Hugs and how are you? xo
I love the “Melodies played/ as the trees swayed” part. Really beautiful.
Thanks so much, Sheila! xo
WOW Lauren. I just continue knowing that guy is SOOOO fortunate to have a wife like you with your deep committed love. I know you are fortunate as well. Bless you both forever (and the kids too!)
Awww…thanks, Scott, for your very kind words…and yes, I am blessed just as much as you say he is! And thanks for your “family” blessings; that’s very sweet of you! xx
so sweet, nourishing to the heart and relationship, to show such beautiful appreciation. .. thank you for your poem, jason
Thank you for your very generous comment, Jason…Your kind words mean a great deal!
Awesome poem Lauren…you blew my heart and mind away with this one…lmay the joys of your love always embrace both your hearts!
Wow, Wendell, thank you for your wonderful words! I’m glad you liked this one and thank you for your blessing; I greatly appreciate it!
Lovely words. 🙂
Thanks for coming by my blog today; I left you a comment of thanks on my blog, but it’s not showing up, and saying “duplicate comment” when I try to leave a new one. So I am writing thank you, here.
Thanks so much, Sam, and also for your comment! WP is “glitchy” sometimes! See you soon! 🙂
David in Maine USA
Thanks so much, David! I appreciate your continued support!
This is very sweet Lauren!
OH I Just LOvE your Poems….. big hugs.. Renee 🙂 Thank you for always taking a minute to drop in and visit my blog…
Awww…thanks, Renee, so much! And I love your inspiring blog and will see you soon! xo
Thanks so much my friend. hugs Renee 🙂
Oh so sweet so full of love….loved it
God bless you 🙂
Thanks, Soma! Hugs and blessings to you, too!
what a beautiful Love, and the inspiration for such elevated poetry. You remind me that there are true Soul Mates that find one another!
Thanks so much, Linda, and yes, I believe there are soul mates for each one of us…it’s all in the timing~ xo
Sweet and lovely! 🙂
Thank you, Cynthia! 🙂
Thanks, Kathryn! I know you can relate! xo
Great! It is such a touching poem.
Thank you so much! I appreciate your visit!
You are welcome.
Lovely ode to husband after Dad is gone–and you two rejoice in your couple-hood!
Thanks so much, Rose! xo
Another lovely expression, Lauren. Hope you have been well, my friend. Keep penning, may your ink never dry. Cheers.
Thank you so much, for your continued kind words, Shaheen…I’ll see you soon, as I’m behind on reading again! Hugs to you, my friend! xo
My dear, no speed in catching up! Take your time and enjoy the weekend, dear Lauren. Hugs.
As everyone else here, I love this, Lauren, I really do. 🙂
Thanks again, Tim! Hope you’re doing well! 🙂
You’re welcome, and I am! Thanks for asking. 🙂
simply beautiful poem, Francina xxx
Thanks so much, Francina! xoxo
Lauren… you really do have some excellent writings!
Thanks so much, Steve! Your comment is very encouraging! 🙂