Rusty’s Heart – A children’s story

On By Lauren Scott, AuthorIn Children's stories

Dear Family and Friends, this story is a bit long, so if you don’t have time to read it, I understand. But if you do, I hope you can appreciate Rusty’s dilemma and recognize the message conveyed. I won’t give away the ending. 🙂 Also, I’ve included an audio version for those of you who would rather listen.

Rusty can’t help but whine and dance around in circles! He knows what’s coming when Mom puts her ball cap on. Today is a crisp, March spring morning when she attaches the blue plaid leash to his matching blue collar. The sky is bright and clear, perfect for a walk around the neighborhood. When he sings (he likes to call it that) and dances, he can tell by the tone of her voice that sometimes she is happy. But there are times when she sounds kind of mad. Maybe he should try calming down. But seriously, what chocolate lab doesn’t get excited for a walk?

She opens the blue front door, and Rusty follows her outside. He lifts his leg on every bush he spots, his nose clueing him into enticing smells. Mom walks at just the right pace while he trots beside her. Occasionally, she jogs, and he picks up the pace, jogging, too. He thinks this is so much fun. The flapping of his long soft ears makes him happy.

Rusty is minding his own business when Sam, the gray squirrel, runs in the street right in front of him! Whenever he sees Sam, he barks up a storm that echoes and bounces from house to house! Sam skitters across the street then skitters back to where he came from, all the while snickering to irritate Rusty. And boy is Rusty irritated!

“Woof! Woof! Woof!” Rusty voices his annoyance and pulls on his leash. All he wants is a chance to catch Sam! And then he thinks…

What would I do if I caught Sam? I mean, I don’t want to hurt him. Yes, he annoys me, but I just want to play!

But once again, Sam gets away! He scurries up the nearest maple tree with the speed and confidence of a black bear, snickering all the way to the top! Sam is an expert at snickering!

How dare him!

“Oh, Rusty, you’ll never catch a squirrel, but it’s always good to try,” Mom says while she pats Rusty on his soft head.

Rusty forgets about Sam as he and his mom turn the corner, and that’s when he sees Tuck, the yellow Labrador, standing in his front yard. What puzzles Rusty is that every time he tries to say hello, Tuck turns the other way. He doesn’t like Rusty and Rusty doesn’t know why. Then he remembers Mom telling him that it’s always good to try. So, he tries again to say hello.

Tuck stands tall at the edge of his yard, close enough to offer a friendly sniff to Rusty. But when Rusty walks up to him, Tuck turns his big head and body around, heading for his mom who stands by the front door. Rusty’s ears fall back tightly against his head and his heart aches. This isn’t the first time he’s been taunted by Sam and ignored by Tuck. With his heavy and hopeless heart, he and his mom leave Tuck’s house and continue walking up the street that begins to incline. Lucy, the beautiful snow-white husky, lives at the top of the hill. Rusty’s had a crush on her for what seems like forever, but she doesn’t pay any attention to him either.

Lucy stands by the white fence that borders her yard, and sure enough, when she spots Rusty trotting up the hill, she runs to the porch and lies down on her bed so he can’t get close to her. She even holds an intimidating stare. Rusty notices this which causes his heart to ache more and his ears to fall back for a second time. He doesn’t know if his heart will ever warm up again. At this very moment, it feels as cold as his big brown nose. He and his mom walk past her house, making a U-turn to head back down the hill to their home.

I love my humans, Mom, Dad, and my sister and brother. But it’s lonely not having friends, and I wish I knew why they didn’t like me. If I had to, I would change my ways. I’m friendly. I don’t bark a lot, except at squirrels, sorry Sam! I don’t sniff where I’m not welcomed. Is it because my coat is the color of copper, and not a true chocolate, blonde, yellow, or shiny black? But why would others not want to be my friend just because of the color of my coat?

While Rusty ponders the cause of his friendlessness, unbeknownst to him, Sam and Tuck meet up with Lucy just outside her white fence.

“I don’t know about you boys, but I’m tired of being mean to Rusty. And just for the record, I find him kind of cute,” Lucy admitted.

“Oh, Lucy, don’t go letting your heart soften up now. Rusty’s different! We all know that, and different doesn’t bode well with our tight group!” Sam chimes in with conviction of an elephant.

“You know, Sam, I think Lucy makes a good point. Just because Rusty looks different doesn’t mean we can’t include him. I guess my eight-year-old heart is beginning to soften, too,” Tuck says as he observes Sam’s fluffy tail standing upright like a surfboard in the sand, his little whiskers moving at lightning speed.

It seems odd that a squirrel weighing no more than a pound can gain control over two dogs the size of Shetland ponies. But Sam’s personality is bigger than him and as powerful as a lion’s.  Lucy and Tuck automatically followed Sam in every adventure they went on, but not anymore. Their hearts and souls are beginning to see the kinder sides. It’s been one whole month and Lucy can’t bear the pure sadness in Rusty’s soulful, amber eyes. And the more Tuck thinks on this issue, the more he considers Rusty the brother he never had. It would be fun to have another buddy to hang around with now and then.

“Sam, what if you or Lucy or I looked different that didn’t align with what Rusty thought was normal? How would you feel if he ignored you when he saw you on the street? Or even worse, what if he growled at you, scaring you out of your wits?”

“Hey, you’re sounding a bit philosophical, old man!” Sam replies.

“Who are you calling old man, Sam? I’m only 8!” Tuck retorts.

Lucy can’t stand this banter any longer, and contrary to what some believe, girls know best!

“Okay, boys, enough is enough! This neighborhood holds plenty of room for all of us, and that includes Rusty! I, for one, would feel devastated to be ignored like he has been because of our unkind behavior. I feel so ashamed, so my only hope is that he can forgive!” Lucy feels the lifting of a huge burden from her heart. Her body even feels lighter as though she can frolic on clouds, and her spirit as bright as the shining sun.

Lucy pokes the latch on the gate with her cold nose, then once it becomes unlatched, with a paw she pushes it open. She walks through and onto the street when Sam scurries up beside her, giving her a surrendering smile. After thinking this situation over and pondering Tuck and Lucy’s words, he agrees with their wisdom. Tuck sidles up beside Lucy on the opposite side, and together, the trio heads downhill to Rusty’s house.

The single-story ranch style home looks quiet from the street. But the trio hopes to find Rusty in the backyard, lying in the sun like he loves to do. Then it will be easy for them to get his attention.

After Rusty and his mom return home from their walk, he is ready for a nap. Exhaustion has taken over his body, not only from the walk and jog, but from the sadness weighing heavy on his heart. In the backyard, a patch of grass in the sunshine beckons him, so he lies down on his side, legs stretched out, and begins to soak up the sun’s warmth. It takes a lot of effort for him to ignore the gloomy thoughts, so he tries to dream of chasing squirrels. But then he hears a loud commotion in the front of the house!

Lucy, Sam, and Tuck yell in one giant burst of sound to rouse Rusty!

“Rusty! You annoying lab!”

“Hi, Rusty, come on out!”

“Hey, Buddy, we need to talk to you!”

Rusty slowly stands; his twelve-year-old legs don’t hurry anymore. Then to his surprise, he sees Lucy, Tuck, and Sam, yes even Sam, jumping up and down at the see-through gate. They speak simultaneously, hard to understand every word. But the word that stands out is FRIEND. And judging by their smiling jowls, and Sam’s happy, fluffy tail swinging from side to side, Rusty understands completely!

His mom hears the joyful barking, too, so she steps outside, and when she notices the trio giving kisses to Rusty through the gate, the sight warms her heart. Her senior pup has been sad for too long now. She opens the gate and joy flows through the air as the foursome hug and kiss in their own canine and squirrelly ways.

“We’re so sorry we were mean to you, Rusty. We never should’ve judged you because of your coat color. I actually think you’re quite handsome. So will you forgive us?” Lucy steps back a few inches, certain that she is blushing after baring her soul.

“Oh, will I ever!” Rusty cheerfully answers. “And Lucy, I actually think you’re beautiful!”

And so, the three canines and the one fuzzy gray squirrel trot and scamper down the street on this spring day – the best ever for Rusty! His heart feels happy again, and he realizes that Sam, Lucy, and Tuck accept him for who he is – they don’t expect him to change. This is the day he not only gains friends, but the day he becomes one.

© Lauren Scott, Baydreamerwrites.com – All rights reserved.
Thank you for stopping by and have a wonderful weekend. ❤️

85 thoughts on “Rusty’s Heart – A children’s story”

    1. Thanks for your lovely comment, Miriam, and Rusty’s story may end up in a future book. But I’m currently working on my first children’s book to be released later this year or early next year. I agree with you about kids learning from stories. It was fun writing about Rusty. ❤️

      1. Congratulations on your children’s book progress, Lauren. I read so many books to my grandkids the last six years. It seems more and more new books are coming out. There’s a market for children’s books. 💖

  6. This is so so beautiful. I’m a sucker for stories about dogs! I love dogs! My alters, my inner kids, loved it too! Thanks Lauren! Your so talented! 🙂 🤗🤗🤗

      1. It mirrors a situation a lot of kids find themselves in, and they will identify with the wonderful resolution to Rusty’s (and their own) problems. It teaches something and has a positive ending, so it looks good to me.

      5. That reminds me of the story in our grade two reader where Mrs. Goose’s roof leaked but she never thought of fixing it until it was raining and when the rain stopped so she could have the roof fixed, she thought, “There’s no need. It’s not leaking.”

      2. No, this is the first of Rusty’s story, and I may try to publish it next year. I’m currently working on my first children’s book with my illustrator. And I hope to release that later this year or maybe in early 2024. It all takes time, but his illustrations are so cute and really bring my character to life. The projects keep me out of trouble. 🙂

  13. So touching story of Rusty’s tale 🌷💝👍 my friend , you are a talented writer and
    I nicely enjoyed through your sweet voice , Congratulations and lots of love 💐🥰👏🏼

      2. Who knows what others will enjoy or appreciate? This story has been sitting in a file for months, and I thought, “Why not share it?” I was worried about the length, but then if people don’t have time to read, that’s fine. I hope to see this published in a book someday. 🙂 I’ll watch for one of yours in the future, Ian.

    1. Thanks so much, Robbie. I’m happy you enjoyed reading about Rusty and his friends. And I’m unsure as to which direction I’ll move with this story, but I’ll definitely keep your offer in mind. I appreciate it very much. 💞🙏🏻

  16. Awesome and beautiful story Lauren. Hope we humans could be like them and accept each other and be friends once again as we are all one. We have so much to learn from animals today. So nice Rusty got included in their friendship. Thanks a lot 😊😊❤️❤️

  17. Lauren, it was comforting to hear your soft, gentle voice. It’s fabulous that you are in the process of writing a children’s book especially with such an important message on diversity. Love your dialogue and I was captured by the story. ❤

    1. Hi Carol, I’m happy that you listened to the audio. That’s something different for me to try. And thank you for your lovely words. I am currently working on a children’s book but a different one that hopefully will be released later this year. Rusty’s tale was my second children’s story that I wrote and I would love to see it in book form. I just don’t know the direction I’ll move forward in. But since you’re such a talented writer, I am going to hang onto your words for a while. 🙂 Thanks again! ❤️

  18. Lauren, what a beautiful story. A wonderful lesson for children on prejudice, so appropriate for the times we’re living in. Yay, Rusty!

  20. Beautifully written, Lauren, with a moral at the end. This is a lovely story for little children. My sister’s dog’s name is Rusty :).

  22. A great story for kids, Lauren.
    ….and what about me?
    I got a bit choked up. I’ve said this many, many times in my life – Humans have a lot to learn from animals!

    (Got your mail. Replied. I have read “The First Morning”. It’s a great start to a book of poetry!)

    1. I get how you feel, Resa! My dog, Copper, inspired this story because of his unusual coat color. And then the story took off. Real life with prejudice and racism came to mind and the message unfolded. But Rusty had to have that happy ending. I’d love to publish this but unsure of the path I’ll choose. I’m currently working on my first children’s book, so Rusty’s story will have to wait. Sorry for the ramble! Aww, I’m glad you liked the first poem. I really hope you like the collection. Hugs again! ❤️🌻

      1. A kids book! That’s cool.
        If you do a compilation of different authors kids’ stories, let me know!
        I have 1, I wrote years ago that I would submit.

        LOL, sorry for my ramble.
        You didn’t really ramble. I think a ramble is 150 words. 😂🙄

        Loving the collection!
        Hugs!!! xxx

      2. Thanks, Resa! If I ever do an anthology, I will keep you in mind. I’m currently in one that just went live. And after seeing all the editing that Yvette did, I’m exhausted. 🙂 Anyway, the name of my book I’m working on is “Cora’s Quest.” My nephew who is 40 and so talented is illustrating it. I won’t go the same route I did for my poetry book, so I’m unsure as to what I’ll do. But I’m excited and hope it comes to fruition. More rambling, or writing, or typing! LOL Ahh, I’m not counting the words!
        Oh, I’m glad you’re loving the collection. That makes me feel good.
        Hugs back atcha! xoxo

      1. A wise decision! I woke up with a flood of memories and thoughts of my mom reading to us when we were youngsters. You must have planted a seed. A beautiful one! 💗

  25. A lovely children’s story, Lauren. I listened to it and enjoyed your speaking voice, the pace, and no stumbling! You tackled the issue of differences and the hurtfulness of exclusion. I’m glad the animals found a way through it, to everyone’s joy. ❤

    1. Thanks for listening and for your lovely words, Diana. That was something new for me to try. And I’m glad you enjoyed Rusty’s story. I thought the message would be not only good but relevant in today’s society. I’d also love to see it in book form in the future but unsure of the path to use. We shall see. ❤️🤗

  26. It’s so funny how dogs have to lift up their legs at every tree. 🤣 They love to mark their territory don’t they? That poor Rusty! Tuck has an attitude! 🐶 Lucy is trying to play hard to get! All Rusty wants is a “friend.” What a great message about being different, being ignored, and being ostracized just because of that fact. Thank goodness Lucy has a change of heart. 💖 What a sweet story Lauren. What a lesson of kindness and diversity. 🥰💖🤗

    1. They sure do, Kym! I love how you really got into the characters. I wanted Rusty to have a happy ending, but I wanted the message to relate to real life. I’m so glad you liked his story. Thanks for reading and for your wonderful comment. ❤️🤗🐶😁

      1. Oh my dear Lauren, it was such a delightful read and thank you so much for your creativity and sharing such a heartwarming story, albeit for children! It’s a message that adults can learn from too. Cheers to Rusty! 🤩🐶😍

  27. rajkkhoja's avatar rajkkhoja

    What a heartwarming & touching story write you. Very interesting words use in lines . I like. Nice messages that adults can learn from too .what a lesson of kindness.
    I listen your voice very good.

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