We hold our breath, sitting as still
as a freeway during morning commute.
Its wings flutter at a possible
eighty times per second, so we’ve read.
It closes the distance between us,
and we know it eyes the dangling
rosy petals. But below those blossoms
lies the sleeping dog. He wouldn’t be
the least bit interested in the winged
creature, but the winged creature
doesn’t know this to be true.
And so, we watch our tiny friend
flit to within a few feet of the blooms,
then disappointment lands in our thoughts
as it retreats to the maple,
camouflaged to the naked eye.
If only it could be brave.
If only it knew there was no threat below
from the sleeping beast. In fact, the beast
quietly snores, and we are confident
he is dreaming of squirrels.
© Lauren Scott, baydreamerwrites.com – All rights reserved.
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author & Poet 
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
Thanks so much for sharing, John!
You are very graciously welcome so much.
So beautiful and lovely poem Lauren. The winged bird would be so scared of the dog though the dog would not bother at all 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
Thanks, Kamal. The observation between bird and canine inspired me. 🙂 Poor bird, to be so afraid, and yet, humans feel the same at times. 💗💗
Yes absolutely true and poor bird and yes we too are like this bird completely. Always welcome dear 💞💞💞💞
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Thank you, Lauren, for the delightful poem!
Joanna
Thanks, Joanna! I’m so happy you enjoyed this poem. 💞
You are more than welcome!
Joanna
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A beautiful poem, and love the blooms, they look like what we call Petunia’s … And loved your tale about your tiny winged friend…. It really is a delight to watch Nature in action and not disturb their flight paths..
Sending Love and hugs your way Lauren… ❤
Thanks so much, Sue, and I think these blooms are Petunia’s. 🙂 I’ve written several poems about our Hummingbird friends. They’re fascinating to watch and so inspiring to write about. Sending lots of love and hugs to you, dear friend. 💗💗
Lots of love and enjoy those wonderful birds and blooms Lauren.. ❤
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I really loved this. I am constantly talking to my lizard and bird friends when I’m in the garden – assuring them that I’m no threat. Unfortunately, I haven’t convinced them yet 🙂
Thanks so much, Janis. I think we have whispered the same to our Hummingbird friends, but they aren’t convinced either, not when our 80 lb. lab lies below their blooms. 🙂
I love these “day in the life” poems of yours, Lauren. Thanks.
Aww, John, I love how you call them “day in the life” poems. 🙂 Thank you! And I’m glad you enjoy them. It’s amazing how just sitting on the patio, quietly watching nature entertain, provides so much inspiration for writing.
I understand. 😁
My daughters have multiple feeders in their homes and they attract dozens of birds at a time, Sounds like New York during business hours but very relaxing to watch.
They are so entertaining and relaxing to watch. New York during business hours? It sure does sound like with multiple feeders. 🙂
If only he knew indeed!
Love this, Lauren! 🐾😘🌷❤️
Thanks, Marina! I suppose like our feathered friend, we all have moments when fear is the dominant factor. But hopefully, he’ll muster up some bravery the next time. Copper has no interest…unless the other party is a squirrel! 🐿️🐿️🤗🕊️❤️❤️❤️
Hopefully next time! Lets hope the little fella doesn’t decide to disguise as a squirrel! 🤣🤣🤣
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Haha! That wouldn’t be smart at all! ❤️🐿️🤗🐿️🤗❤️
No, it wouldn’t, would it?!!!! 🤣🤣🤣😘🐾😘
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Such a beautiful and ravishing poem about the Hummingbird Lauren, very well written🔥🔥🔥👌
Thanks very much for your beautiful comment, Mthobisi. I truly appreciate it and am glad you enjoyed this window into our hummingbird’s conundrum. 😊
We can find analogy to our own human fears Lauren.
Very nice poem!
Loved it
That was also my thought when writing this, Marie. Thank you for your insight and lovely words. I’m so glad you loved this hummingbird quest. ❤️🤗❤️
Beautiful
Thank you so much!
Beautiful prose, Lauren! I love hummingbirds, your words bring a sweet smile to my face. I miss them in these colder months but know they will return and delight my heart again.
Thanks for sharing.
Many Blessings
Lisa xoxo
Thanks, Lisa! This was written in the summer and we’ve become fascinated with hummingbirds. My mom used to love them too, and now I can see why. I appreciate your beautiful comment. ❤️❤️❤️
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That was sweet!
Thanks, Debbie! ❤️❤️❤️
Hummingbirds can be wonderful to watch.
We have become fascinated with them, so they have starred in several of my poems. 🙂
beautiful imagery Lauren. I had one that trapped itself in my open air catio today. I need to make sure it found it’s way out. so glad i read this to remind me. 💗
Thanks, Cindy! Is your hummingbird okay? Did you get it out? I hope so! I truly appreciate your kind words. 💗💗
Beautiful !
Thanks very much! 💗
Nice
Beautiful photo! I loved the imagery you used for the dog. It sounds exactly like my dog, Churchill: getting older and lazier and starting to just observe instead of jumping to action. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem 😊
Thanks for your kind words, and I’m glad my poem resonated with you regarding your dog, Churchill. Our dog is 12 years old, so he’s slowing down, but still a little spunky when he sees squirrels. 🙂
You’re very welcome 😊 our Churchill is 7 years old. Sadly, he is a mix of bigger breeds and is considered to be a senior dog, but he still acts like a child! Haha Churchill loves chasing squirrels too! 😊
Beautiful Red 🌺
Thank you!