cackles in the night
shadows follow their echoes
watch your back closely
LS 2016
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21 thoughts on “A ‘Chill’ in the Air”
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LS 2016
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Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
Mischief in the air. Fun Haiku.
Thanks, Kim! Have a great weekend! ♥
You too.
Lauren, this is such a fun haiku for Halloween. I love it. Hugs, my friend.
Thanks so much, Michelle! It was time I wrote a new haiku and Halloween inspired me. 🙂 Sending many hugs to you and have a great weekend! ♥
Thanks, and the same back to you.
While you have the ghostly Halloween there, the nightly air in India is aglow with lamps and festive fireworks celebrating Diwali. Happy Halloween, Lauren….
Glowing lamps and festive fireworks sound fabulous, Raj! Halloween is different now with older ‘kids’ but we still pass out candy and dress festively. We’re silly, I guess. 🙂 Although this year, we might have a houseful with our daughter, her b.f., and their friends, to carve pumpkins and watch scary movies. So it’ll be livelier, which is always fun. Anyway, have a wonderful celebration! I believe the main day is Sunday, right? But it continues for five days…Happy Diwali!
A ‘Chill’ In The Air II
the Trump of doom calls
with more tricks than treats I fear
watch your back closely
A good addition to mine, Ben, and there is definite ‘chill’ in the air 😊
Not an addition as such; more of an echo. (And you did allude to echoes in your piece. ) Not ghouls are not restricted to the 31st of October after all. As ever I am most grateful for your inspiration, Lauren.
Yes, echo is more appropriate, sorry. 😊 And you are so right about ghouls that are haunting us! Thanks so much for your kind words, Ben!
Please don’t apologise – no need. 🙂 I was meaning to say that I was not wishing to diminish your writing by “improving ” it through adding material but rather honouring it by revealing its inherent potential.
All cells of one body. Some folk get that intuitively, others not so easily so we lend a hand.
Not *all* ghouls. Oops. 😳
I understand, Ben, and appreciate it. Sorry just comes out easily sometimes. 🙂 And no worries about the error; I still wish WP would offer an ‘edit’ button for those who leave comments.
Yes. 🙂
And hide your chocolates!
Happy Halloween, Lauren.
Of course, I will, Binky! 🙂 Have fun with the rest of the Wombies!
Hi, Lauren. Found your super Halloween Haiku again and sharing on Twitter & FB… Have an , awesome autumn, my friend! 🙂 xo
Aww, thanks, Bette! I almost forgot about this, and I appreciate the shares, too. I also wish you the same! Big hugs! ❤️🍁🎃
Thanks, Lauren…feeling the LOVE! ❤