Some stories last forever
with fairy tale happy endings,
leaving the readers with a sigh
Ours was written
in scribbles and question marks,
leaving them wondering why
There are chapters
I would have wished deleted,
instead I read and cried
Perhaps a re-write
could be possible,
are you willing to try?
When you’re ready
to re-enact our parts
I’ll be standing by
LScott © 2013
(Fiction)
Baydreamer ~ Lauren Scott 
Sounds a lot like life, that book!
I know, it sure does, doesn’t it, George? Thanks for stopping by and have a great evening! 🙂
I just love the way you write 😉
Thanks so much, Ericka, you made my day and your encouragement keeps me writing! 🙂 xx
Complicated things, relationships. (Or so I’ve read. 😉 )
Yes, they are, but they can be exciting, too! 🙂
Yes Lauren! I can see this one well and your gorgeous words made me sigh big!! HBL XX❤
Aww..thanks, Chris, you are too kind to me! HBL back atcha! ♥
I believe in second chances. 🙂 This one’s beautiful.
I’m glad you do and thanks so much, Dianda! xxx
Oh, btw, that’s Dianda! Forgot to log back into my cats & Co account. 😉
Got it, thanks, Dianda, and for also stopping by! 🙂
Lovely, Lauren! Love this (and so relate):
‘Ours was written
in scribbles and question marks,
leaving them wondering why’ XO ♥
Thanks so much, Diane, and I’m glad those lines came to mind. I’m sure many can relate (unfortunately) :)…Sending you many hugs, my friend! xo
Aha, look at you with the metaphors!! Love it, Lauren 🙂 ❤
I learn from the best 🙂 and think of you often when I’m really trying to dig deep, metaphorically speaking, Christy! Hugs! ♥
You’re so kind, Lauren! Hugs back for your day ❤
This is so beautiful! Love it! =)
Thanks so much for your kind comment and I’ll be over your way soon, too! 🙂
Wow!
I can relate to this very much, in a certain way
Beautiful writing Lauren
Makes a lot of sense
I like the distinction between a fairytale story and one with question marks… that’s the difference between fantasy and reality.
Although it all begins with a fantasy, until life suddenly wakes one up from the dream!
Love this very much!
Thumbs up Lauren!
Aww…thanks very much for your insightful comment, Eve! I really appreciate it and you taking the time! xxx
There are chapters
I would have wished deleted,
instead I read and cried….
lOVED-THIS-POEM-AND-CAN-ESPECIALLY-RELATE-TO-THIS-VERSE…
But-I-believe-its-seasons-like-these-that-add-life-and-substance-to-our-poetry,
giving-conviction-to-the-deep-wells-from-which-our-words-rise…..Beautiful,Lauren-and-cheers-to-second-chances!
❤
Love-and-Hugs……
Thank you for your lovely comment, Celeste, and I completely agree with you about these seasons adding life and substance…sending love and hugs back to you, my friend…♥
very clever, I liked it!
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Thanks, Deb! xoxo
Love!!
Thanks, Bianca! Hugs!