I feel like a machine
(not a mom, a wife, or a human being)
one that’s shiny and not too old
I could be silver; I could be gold
One that stands 5’7” in height
and would be useful day or night
This is just what I am
A bright, polished ATM
LScott © 2013
25 thoughts on “Identity”
really liked this Lauren…great use of Humor
Thanks so much, Tim! I was inspired after giving my son money for last night! 🙂 Have a great weekend!
Did you write this for me? LOL! Loved it!
Of course! lol Well, actually for my son, but he doesn’t know it! 🙂 One of the many joys of parenting…thanks so much for your kind words! 🙂
Oh my – you got me here Lauren — I did not expect — I thought it was just Super Lauren 🙂 ATM yes! Enjoyed this tons dear one ~ x Love, Robyn
Super Lauren? Haha! No, it’s like giving my son money for last night, then these silly lines pop into my mind for a silly poem! 🙂 Thanks so much, Robyn, and Happy Weekend, my friend! Hugs!
ha h aha Lauren too good
big hugs You rock Sista 🙂
Soma, your comment made me smile! Thanks for the smiles and hugs and I’m sending some back to you! You rock, too, Sista! Lots of love!
LOL – kachung 🙂
Kachung is right, Eric! 🙂 Oh, the joys! 🙂 Happy Weekend!
Gave me a big smile this morning Lauren! And I know the feeling! ❤ H L XX
Anything to make you smile, Chris, and I’m sure many can relate! 🙂 Have a wonderful weekend and sending hugs and love! HBL ♥
ATM and other things too!
You have me smiling! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend!
You too, my dear far away friend! X
LOL Oh dear.
Glad I made you smile! 🙂
Love it. You are ‘bright and polished’. hugs. Renee ♥
Aww…thanks, Renee, some of the joys we go through! 🙂 Hugs back to you for a wonderful weekend! ♥
Lol. Nice one.
Thanks, Audrina! 🙂
I so understand the feeling Lauren! If indeed you were a machine we would still love you! Great poem!
Aww…thanks, Wendell! That’s good to know and warms my heart! 🙂 Hugs and blessings to you and your family!
Lol…. great humor in your poem, delightful.. I think many of us can relate to that feeling 🙂
love and hugs xxx
Thanks, Francina, I’m glad you enjoyed my humor and I assumed many could relate! 🙂 Many hugs! xxx