Will you take my hand
let me linger in your eyes
while the music guides
as we glide across the sky?
Will you hold me close
so I’ll hear your heart beat
as we waltz beside the moon
with our bodies in sync?
Will you kiss me like no other
lowering my defenses
as we slow dance above the clouds
stirring up my senses?
And when the music ends
we’ll still dance, you’ll see
I’ll then do the giving
Let me make your heart sing
© 2013 LScott
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
this is very beautiful Lauren
Thanks so much, Tim, I appreciate your kind comment!
This is so lovely Lauren – I enjoyed the vision of it!
Sorry I’ve been absent – am just starting to get caught up with a few blogs. Hope all is well with you. 🙂
Thanks, Betty, and no worries about being absent. We all have our moments and I’m just happy to see you back! Many hugs, my friend!
so beautiful my friend. ♥
Aww…thanks, Renee! ♥
lovely 🙂 xx
Thanks so much, Sharon! Hugs to you!
I was interrupted earlier (doorbell) when I stopped by here and “liked” you, so didn’t get a chance to say how much I really loved your poem, Lauren! xx
Aww…thanks for coming back, Penny! How dare we get interrupted while blogging! 🙂 Sincerely, though, thank you! xxx
Muuah Beautiful ♥ ♥ ♥
oh your poems make my soul sing and dance 🙂
Aww..MUAH back to you, Soma, and thank you for your lovely words! They make my heart sing and dance! ♥ xoxo
Till the end, till the very end —- and beyond. For an eternity, you’ll see.
Love the sentiments expressed so eloquently, Lauren.
Thanks so much, Eric, I always love your lovely comments! 🙂
Beautiful, love it Lauren! 🙂
Thanks so much, PJ! Many hugs!
You very welcome Lauren. Thank you for hugs so in need of them! God Bless
Okay, here are some more! 🙂 (seriously) xx
Thank you, trying get strength post on my end! I’m hurting so much! God Bless:)
Beautiful gem Lauren, as always. Im waltzing in the sky 🙂
❤ Xx HBL
Thanks so much, Chris, and I’m glad you’re taking advantage of the mood! 🙂 ♥♥
Dancing above the clouds.. what a wonderful image xo
Thanks, Christy! I learn from the best! 🙂 xoxo
How poignant! These lines absolutely floored me:
“Will you kiss me like no other
lowering my defenses
as we slow dance above the clouds
stirring up my senses?”
Wow, thank you, Chatty Owl, for your kind comment! You pay me a great complement after reading your writing!
It was an honest response from my heart 🙂
Wonderfully written… There was even a melody that popped up in my head when I read this… 😉
Aww..thank you and now I’m intrigued by this mystery melody! 🙂
Lovely poem, and so romantic, dear friend, love it! 🙂 xoxox
Thanks so much, Julie! Have a happy Wednesday! Sending many hugs! xoxo
How wondrous and romantic dearest Lauren… just gave me chills reading – I was imagining this magical waltz amongst the clouds…. so beautiful! x Robyn
Thanks so much for your beautiful comment, Robyn. Wouldn’t it be lovely to waltz above the clouds? We can dream…have a lovely weekend, my friend. Hugs!
Stunning and wishful poem, dear Lauren. You are so good at writing love poems. You keep amazing me.
hugs and love from across the miles xoxo
Thanks so much, Francina, you made my day and it’s just beginning! Hugs and love to you, too! xoxo
The melodies of your words dear sister, so refresh and renew my spirit! An awesome romantic poem Lauren…I can only wish that I could write that way, so elegant and timeless! Hugs and blessings always!
Aww..thanks, Wendell, you are too kind! And I always think the same thing when I read your poems! I’m grateful for your presence and send you many hugs and blessings, as well!