in my rainbow
in my rain
in my winter
for my pain
the world I reside
© LScott 2013
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~ a thread of words from every stitch of life ~
29 thoughts on “Completion”
Lovely piece!God Bless
Thanks, PJ, I’m glad you liked this…Blessings to you, too!
You very welcome, 🙂 We ccan never have enough of his Blessings 🙂 I pray all is well on your end. God Bless 🙂
very beautiful sentiment Lauren
Thanks so much, Tim!
So very eloquent Lauren…it refreshes the spirit within!
Aww…thanks, Wendell! Your comment is a nice ending to my day!
Hi Lauren, this is lovely 🙂 xx
Thanks, Ina! I appreciate your kind words! xoxo
Absolutely beautiful lauren! I enjoyed this very much 🙂 hugs
Aww…thanks, J, and I appreciate your visit, too! Many hugs back to you! 🙂
Excellent! 🙂 I love the final part.
Thanks so much, Joe, and the final part was a quick thought, but now I’m glad I used it! 🙂
You certainly said a lot there in just a few words, Lauren! Beautiful! 🙂
Love and hugs xxx
Aww…thanks, Deb, and much love and many hugs to you, too! xoxo
Thanks so much, Val! 🙂
Beautiful words Lauren which left me with a joyful sigh. 🙂
HBL ❤ XX
Aww…what a lovely thing to say, Chris, thank you! 🙂 HBL ♥ xx
Beautiful poetry Lauren. Hugs!
Thanks, Scott! Hugs back! 🙂
“You are the colours of my rainbow”. Poignant words of love and happiness my dear Lauren. It is the sentence I shall use today to all I love. Virginia
Another beautiful comment, thanks so much, Virginia! xo
Wonderful you have captured the essence of finding that completion as we compliment each other in our seeking of our soul mate.. Whether that be in a partner or as we feel the rainbows of Mother Nature touch our skin as we soak up the Sun or bathe in the Ocean… We find Peace within one another.
Thank you for your lovely, insightful comment, Sue, and for your kind words…have a lovely weekend!
Straight and loving!
Serene, Lauren! I love Sue Dreamwalker’s comment – that unity and connectedness can be ours in varying ways. So a beautiful romantic poem like this can be enjoyed even for those of us who don’t have a visible partner, for love always shows the way. XO
Few words but with beautiful meaning! 🙂
Thank you so much! 🙂