It’s not what you think
My dreamy state and
Light-weight feeling
have me reeling
but it’s not you
(don’t stand too close, please)
I’d love a breeze
and my words don’t tumble
my feet don’t stumble
because of you
(I repeat)
It’s not what you think
I don’t take a double blink
(when you saunter by)
No, you don’t catch my eye
Where do you
get these notions?
(as though my heart’s been sprinkled
with love potions)
Of course, you’re not to blame
don’t be so vain
I’m feeling a bit flushed
(oh, my, how you make me blush)
Check my temperature, would you?
I must make do,
but I think it’s the flu
Oh, maybe, baby, it IS you!
© LScott 2012
🙂
This One rocks me Lauren xo
Really beautifullllll xo Cat
Awww…thanks, Cat, I’m glad you liked this…I wasn’t sure about posting it, so you reassured me that it was okay…xoxo Big hugs!
Always Write from Your heart 🙂 🙂 🙂 It’s lovely 🙂 🙂 🙂 xo
Thanks, again, my friend~xoxo 🙂
🙂 🙂 🙂 xo
Love this, Lauren – sweetly romantic, with a humorous twist. ~ Love, Julie xoxox
Thanks, Julie, it was fun to write; one of those silly moments! Love and hugs back to you! xo
Beautifully done once again Lauren!
Thanks, David, I’m glad you liked it, as I wasn’t sure about posting it! 🙂
Who says that the notion of denial can’t be romantic? You proved that wrong here….this was so impassioned and I love the place in your emotions from which you wrote this from….bravo, Lauren!
Celeste
Your comment made my day, Celeste, thank you, as this almost landed in the recycle bin, but now I’m glad I posted it! 🙂
beautiful and had a chuckle over how we keep denying 🙂
you are a lovely poet 🙂
hugs 🙂
Thanks so much, Soma, it’s funny…the title almost was “Denial” but that sounded too blah…anyway, I’m glad you chuckled and thank you for your kind words, my friend~ xoxo
Lauren this is so wonderful. I’m reading the words, smiling, and then singing them. Truly a song of love. Virginia
Awww…your comment is lovely in itself, Virgina, thank you once again, for your kind words….I’m happy to bring a song your way~
Oh how beautifully you write Lauren!
Oh, Archana, you made my day, as lately, I’ve had some “low” moments about writing…so, thank you ever so kindly, my friend~
Love it very creative.
Thanks, Kim, I wasn’t sure about it, but it was fun to write and I’m glad others have liked it…
Sweetly humorous, you play so well with words, Lauren, and you end it beautifully, too!
Thanks so much, Cynthia, it was a fun poem to write, but I wasn’t sure if it was good enough to post, so I’m glad it seemed to be okay! 🙂
I nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award. Please visit my blog for details. HUGS, Autumn
http://autumn-sunshine.net/blogs/
Awww…thanks, Autumn! I appreciate you thinking of me! Heading over your way now! Hugs! xx
That was fantastic, Lauren! Love it, my friend!
God bless, and hugs to you.xo
Thanks, Deb, I’m glad you like this one; it was fun to write, nonetheless! Hugs and blessings to you, too! xoxo
Love this and love it when someone writes something that immediately triggers ideas for lines in my head. Inspiring!
Thank you, GJ, and I’m honored to have inspired you, too! You made my day! I’ll be over your way soon; I’m following you, but I don’t receive your new posts…thanks so much and have a wonderful day!
Lauren
hahahaha, this is so funny and sexy at the same time!
well done, Lauren!
I know, funny, huh? It was fun to write, so I’m really glad it made you smile! Thanks so much, Nanda! xx
thank you for sharing it! 😉
xx
You are very talented Lauren. It’s not easy to write positive, beautiful pieces like you often do.. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks so much, Alex, this was more fun than beautiful, but I appreciate your kind words! 🙂
I love this one a LOT! (Can’t believe I’m so behind with your posts….)
Awww…thanks, Caddo, and it’s an honor to see your smiling face so much today! Love, hugs and blessings!
Beautiful poem Lauren. It’s another one that I’m glad you posted again from that time frame that I was out of it.
Hope your Monday was blessed. See you tomorrow 🙂
Thanks so much, Scott, and sounds good! 🙂