I long to be your only star
within your sky of dreams
I ask you to open your heart
repair the broken seams
I apologize for words unsaid
for those said time and again
To hurt you is not my intention
I often wonder how you’ve been
I only wish to see you smile
hear you laugh among the trees
I only long to hold you close
feel your breath beside the breeze
Chances don’t come freely
I know this in my heart
My plea you’ll hear one more time
to keep us ne’er apart
© LScott 2012
(fiction)
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
Your words are so very soothing, and always needed to a heart in love! Its a beautiful reminder of what is needed daily to lift one’s soul. Its beauty is a treasure as is its beloved message! A very wonderful poem that will brings its light to my rest! Peace and blessings!
I am honored to receive such a lovely comment, Wendell, thank you very much!
Oh forgiveness..if only hearts could ….life would be so easy..
the pain and the waiting
i wish every heart gets a second chance
what a beautiful poetry Lauren.
hugs 🙂
I do, too, Soma, thank you! Hugs and Blessings!
Simply elegant 🙂
I am certain that I will be following you, your work is breath-taking ! 🙂
Love,
Naima.
Thank you so much for your very kind words, Naima! 🙂
This is a really pretty poem love it.
Thank you so much! 🙂
I just love the sweetness in your words, Lauren… 😉
Thanks, Nanda!:)
“My plea you’ll hear one more time
to keep us ne’er apart” – so beautiful Lauren! I love your use of “ne’er” too; this is so heartfelt. 🙂 x
Coming from you, Eve, I’m honored! Thank you so much! xo
I absolutely loved it. 😉
Thanks so much, Albert! I’m glad you enjoyed this! 🙂
This poem fits my life and marriage right now so beautifully as our marriage seems to be getting a second chance “to keep us ne’er apart”
Awww…I am so glad you’re both getting a second chance; your comment made my day!
Forgiveness…re-affirmation…this is what’s needed to make love and romance last, thanks for the reminder, Lauren!
Thanks, Cynthia, you said it well, too!
Much love, Lauren!
Hugs!! 🙂
Hugs to you, too, Archana, thanks! 🙂
Ahhh, Lauren….this was just so sugary sweet and redeeming…..very nice!
Celeste
Thanks, Celeste, your sweet comment is a bright ending to my day!
There are past loves from previous lives that I still feel this way about–and they know I wish them only happiness!
I can relate! 🙂
So beautiful Lauren…. nearly brought tears to my eyes ;P
Awww…thanks so much, Mike, I’m truly glad you enjoyed this one~
This is absolutely beautiful Lauren. I believe everyone can relate to this piece just as I have. Thank you for sharing xox
Thanks so much, Maryanne! I hope you had a wonderful weekend! Hugs!
Amazing work Lauren! Very Beautifully written! I’m glad I found your blog with such amazing poetry work. I’m a newbie to this blogger world, an amateur writer! I would be following your work for more poetry and other stuff, hoping the same from you! 🙂
Love,
Rohan
Hi Rohan,
Thanks so much for your very kind words…my blog is mainly poetry and I am also an amateur writer, just writing from the heart…I appreciate your visit and follow and have done the same. I just visited you, too! Blogging is a whole new world, fun, enlightening and you meet many wonderful people. I hope you continue to enjoy your time here and also on your own blog!
Lauren 🙂