Friday evening provided inspiration for this haibun…
Heading north, airplanes soar in the clear blue, spotlighted by final sun-rays. The golden orb slowly turns in for repose. The sky transforms into a velvet cloak with a few winking stars. Temperatures fall for relief. A covert presence performs a chirping chorus, echoing through firs and oaks – nightly courtship calls. A welcomed soundtrack, soothing like ocean waves for inland people.
soaking in stillness
listening to nature’s song
crickets serenade
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© Lauren Scott, Baydreamerwrites.com
I couldn’t get a good photo, so let your
imaginations do the work! Happy weekend! ❤️🤗

Lauren Scott
Author – King Copper: Our dog’s life in poetry
Author – Cora’s Quest (a children’s book)
Author – Ever So Gently: A Collection of Poetry
Author – More than Coffee: Memories of Verse and Prose
Author – Finding a Balance: A Collection of Poetry
Author – New Day, New Dreams: A Collection of Poetry
Co-Author – Tranquility: An Anthology of Haiku
Co-Author – Petals of Haiku: An Anthology
Co-Author – This Is How We Grow
Co-Author – Poetry Treasures 2: Relationships
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Ohhhh!
Soaking in stillness
Three perfect words!
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Thanks, Vicki! It’s good to do now and then. Have a peaceful Sunday. ❤️🤗🌻
You, too! 🥰
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What a comforting piece.
Thanks, Violet! I’m glad you found this piece comforting. 🩷
“crickets serenade ” yes !!
Beautiful Lauren ❤️🥰💖
Happy Sunday dear friend xoxox
Thanks, Maggie! Friday evening was so beautiful that this piece was inspired. Happy Sunday and evening to you, dear friend! 💖🌻💖🌻💖😘🥰
Beautifully evoked Lauren.
You are most welcome always xoxox
Thank you very much 🥰❤️🥰
Happy Sunday to you dear friend 🙏💖🙏💖
Sending hugs, Maggie 😘🩷🌻🌸
Squishy hugs back to you dear Lauren ❤️🌻🥰
I like those short poems where you have to choose your words so carefully. Nicely done, Lauren.
Thanks for your lovely words, Anneli. I like haiku and haibun the best for short, concise poems. Enjoy your Sunday. 🩷
You too, Lauren.
Really beautiful, Lauren.
Thanks so much, Esther. 💕
soothing indeed, and I wasn’t even there!
Thanks so much, Annette. Mission accomplished. 🥰
Outstanding imagery, Lauren.
Thanks so much, Balroop. I appreciate your feedback. 💕🌻
That is a lovely poem, Lauren. You really put me there!
Thanks so much, Jan, and that’s good to hear! 🥰
Nature’s song… that is always sweet music to my ears, and colorful art to my eyes too 😊 Lovely description and haibun, Lauren!
It’s music to my ears too, Nicole! Thank you for your lovely words. I appreciate your feedback and wish you a wonderful week! 💖
Lovely haibun, Lauren! I hope you are having a wonderful weekend!
Thanks so much, Steve, and it was great! Back to work today though! 🙂
You’re welcome, Lauren, and have a great week!
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A lovely haibun, Lauren! I related to it.
Thanks so much, Liz, and that’s wonderful! 💕
You’re welcome, Lauren!
My daughter who lives in Auburn CA relaxes after work in the evenings sometimes with her phone and a flight app that shows all the planes passing overhead and tries to identify those passing above as a way to wind down from her strenuous teaching job.
Thanks for reading and sharing, Ian. I’m glad this piece evoked family memories. 😊
I found the sound of crickets soothing. My wife and I stayed at a bed and breakfast last night and went to sleep and woke up to the sound of ocean waves and seals. The waves become white noise; the seals not so much.😊
I’m glad you can relate to the soothing sounds of the crickets, Pete, and I understand about the seals. 🙂
I love soothing sounds found in nature
The best music, right? Thanks for commenting, Beth. 🥰
A beautiful poem. It reminded me of the day we had today. We had a sunny but cooler day. The sky was clear blue. The cicadas has stopped singing but we still have crickets.
Thanks so much, Thomas, and I love your description, so beautiful too. Have a good Monday!
Thank you and I hope you have a good Monday evening
I like listening to nature’s song always. Lovely haibun, Lauren. Enjoy your week ahead.
I’m so glad you enjoyed this haibun, Hazel. Thank you, and you do the same! 💖
My pleasure, Lauren! Stay blessed.
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Late evening can be a nice time to reflect and relax.
So true, Binky. Have a good week!
A soothing piece, and beautifully done, Lauren.💕
Thanks so much, Eugi. I appreciate you saying so. 🩷
You’re welcome, Lauren. 💕
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Ahh, I haven’t heard that serenade for … years, perhaps decades. Thank you for the reminder, Lauren!
I do remember their song, and that of the cicada as well.
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You’re welcome, Resa. It was a lovely evening that inspired a poem. Thank you for your beautiful comment! 🥰💕🌻 xoxoxo
Thank you for your beautiful poem!
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I used to look forward to the sound of the cicada encouraging me to sleep of an evening as a child but unfortunately as towns become cities and trees are sacrificed for housing those happy sounds are replaced by the sound of traffic.
I understand, Ian, and it’s really sad. We live in a quiet neighborhood, and the main road is a mile away. So Friday night, it was clear out, beautiful, and the crickets serenaded us. I hope you get to hear more of nature’s songs.
When we first moved to the Sunshine Coast the house we bought had trees and wildlife coming up to our back fence. Over the ten years we spent there before moving to a quiet retirement resort with lakes a suburb exploded around us with roads and houses. Now we are here because the university is only a ten minutes drive away the area has exploded into a bustling town with blocks of student housing everywhere but we still have trees and lakes with lots of birdlife in this resort. We are only twenty minutes drive from the beautiful Pacific Ocean with hundreds of miles of golden beaches.
I’m glad you still have the ocean nearby, and trees and lakes and birdlife, Ian. And twenty minutes isn’t bad at all. That’s our drive to the redwoods. 🙂
Soaking in stillness nothing else exists. Nice Lauren 🙏
Thanks, Kamal! 🥰🌻
Beautiful, Lauren!
Thanks so much, Dawn! 🧡
Always welcome dear Lauren ❤️❤️❤️
This is delightfully peaceful.
Thanks for your lovely words, Robbie. I’m glad you enjoyed this haibun. 💖