It Ain’t Winning If Without You by Michelle Ayon Navajas
Michelle Ayon Navajas’ 7th book, It Ain’t Winning If Without You, is a collection of beautiful poetry that is lovingly dedicated to her beloved father who has passed away. The poems are divided into three sections, most in her preferred form, freestyle, but many in various syllabic forms as well. Michelle pays tribute to her inspiring and hardworking muse that any author will find relatable. She writes about love for her father and love of the heart – its every edge, jagged and smooth. Then she pays tribute to those who read and love her work. A very endearing end to this collection.
This book is over 300 pages, so I took my time reading and rereading each poem. I nestled into my comfy sofa at the end of each evening and sunk into Michelle’s engaging words. Her poetry is written in the first person, very intimate, so it was effortless to slide into each phrase and feel the emotions enfold me in their deepest meaning. Her style of writing is accessible and conversational as though we’re sitting across from each other, sharing a cup of coffee or tea, and she’s divulging her personal feelings.
Since both of my parents have passed, Michelle’s poems about her father resonated. I know what the heart endures when a parent leaves our physical world. Her signature poem, “My Papa” truly tugs at the heart. But her love poems, well, the varied emotions are exquisitely expressed, and there were too many favorites to list, but a few are “Sixty-Five”, “Crimson Sky”, “What am I to You?”, and “Loneliness too.” A real beauty that exemplifies Michelle’s talent is:
The Moon
the moon envies my midnight soul
for it shines brightly as it ever had
now that your heart has been thawed
from being frozen for so long
without even knowing why
without even asking why
but one thing is sure my dear
your unfrozen heart has made my soul
euphoric and alive and ecstatic
that even the moon has been jealous of.
This lovely collection of poems is meant to be savored, to slowly dip into the deliciousness for supreme enjoyment. Highly recommended for all poetry enthusiasts who love diving into poetry about the joys and sorrows of life, the struggles and celebrations of the heart, and poems on gratitude.
The Winding Road: A journey of Survival by Miriam Hurdle
The Winding Road by Miriam Hurdle is a detailed account of her journey after being diagnosed with metastatic melanoma in 2008. Melanoma is the most serious type of skin cancer because of its ability to spread to vital organs if it’s not detected early. But this rare form of melanoma was discovered when Miriam was seen for a routine procedure. Imagine going in for a procedure that is conducted on a regular basis, then leaving with news that shockingly obscures the view you have of your future. When I began to read Miriam’s narrative, a version of the old adage came to mind, “We can’t truly understand unless we walk in the same shoes.”
And yet, Miriam’s story is relatable on the surface as my husband is a melanoma survivor. Even so, reading Miriam’s experience evoked fearful memories of the days to follow the diagnosis when his outcome was still undetermined.
Miriam tells her story like it was without mincing any discomfort. Following the diagnosis, she was given two treatment options to choose from, and it was a difficult choice to make. Then The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost appeared in her mind, specifically these lines:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I –
I took the one less traveled by.
And that has made all the difference.
Miriam wrote, “I gazed at the road of unknown. I sought affirmation.”
I was so moved by this profound declaration.
I was also touched by the kindness of others that shined in various ways throughout her journey. This loving support afforded her the strength to keep believing, to continue pushing through the grueling treatment. The pain that Miriam endured was beyond unimaginable. But her persistence, faith, and strength were beyond commendable.
If you don’t believe in miracles, I implore you to read this moving book because I know without a doubt, you’ll have a change of heart.
I hope you enjoyed these interviews, and to read more of these wonderful authors, visit Michele here and Miriam here.
Thank you for stopping by and I wish you a fabulous day! ❤️
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You are a fast reader. Wow! Wonderful reviews. XoXo congratulations to these two amazing Authors.
I read them last month, Selma, but I was slow on writing the reviews because of working on my book. 🙂 Thanks for your kind words, my friend. xo
Both are great books. I read and enjoyed Miram’s book for the same reason as you.
Thanks for adding your wonderful thoughts, Darlene!
Mich is not only a very talented poet and writer, but a wonderful person too. So loving and giving.
She is, Sadje. I agree. 🙂
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Oh, thank you Sadje…i miss this one
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Both reviews rich with the character and essence of each amazing author. Nicely done Lauren! 💞💞
I’m sure Mich and Miriam are just thrilled.
Thanks, Cindy. I’m glad you like my reviews. I’m slow on posting because of my book launch. 🙂 But I enjoyed both of these for their different purposes. 💖
I sure did. It’s wonderful you’re able to keep up❤️
Well, I read these books before my launch, but then I was late in writing and posting the reviews. 🙂 Good thing it’s not a race; I’d come in last! 🥰
Nahhhh you are doing great… I’m last 😂
Thank you Cindy
Always Mich😄
Thank you for the reviews of both books. I felt your emotional tug at my heart.
Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely words. 🩷
Michelle is a new poet for me. Thank you for introducing her to me Lauren, you know how much poetry attracts me! I’ve read Miriam’s road to survival – a poignant memoir! Congratulations to both for these fabulous reviews.
I’m glad you liked my reviews, Balroop. Sharing these are good ways to introduce new authors like you said. I’m sure you’ll enjoy Michele’s poetry, and Miriam’s book is a poignant memoir. Thanks for your kind words!
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Such great reviews, Lauren!
You are right, that declaration by Miriam is really moving!
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Thanks so much, Marina, and Miriam will be thrilled to read your comment. Hugs xoxoxo
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Wonderful and enticing reviews, Lauren. My sweety and I have both lost our parents, the last one five years ago this month. Each milestone brings them back along with the grief; it’s amazing how it can hit you even with the slightest recollection.
Thanks so much, Steve, and I’m sorry you’ve lost both your parents too. It is so surreal. And you’re right about each milestone and even a slightest recollection. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts.
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Congratulations to Michelle and Miriam on the excellent reviews! I, too, found The Winding Road uplifting and inspirational.
Thanks for reading my reviews, Liz, and for your kind words. I’m glad you agree with me about Miriam’s book too.
You’re welcome, Lauren.
Thank you for sharing your reviews of Navajas’ poetry and Miriam Hurdle’s memoir. I’m glad you related to the poetry – especially the ones that expressed loss of a parent. My parents have also passed on, so I understand that feeling. And Miriam’s memoir is one I definitely want to read.
Thanks for taking the time to read my reviews, Barbara. I’m sorry to hear about your parents too, but I’m glad you understand. And I’m sure you’ll find Miriam’s book to be inspirational like I did.
Tha song is so touching for me that the poem written tribute her Dad 🙏🌹👍🏻 beautiful 😍 Best Wishes for
Review of the book dear friend📚 The writer’s story so inspiring and thank you so much for sharing 👏♥️💐
Hi Thattamma, thank you so much for your lovely words and wishes. I’m glad you enjoyed my reviews of these two wonderful books. ❤️🌻❤️
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What lovely reviews of two very different yet equally lovely books! ❤
Thanks, Layla! I appreciate you reading and your kind words. 🩷
Lauren, you’ve written 2 wonderful reviews.
Both books sound fabulous.
Congratulations to Michelle and Miriam!
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Thanks for your wonderful words and wishes to the authors, Resa! 💖🌻💖
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Beautiful reviews Lauren for beautiful books. I loved Miriam’s book, and thanks for introducing us to Michelle’s book. Hugs xx
Hi Lauren, two beautiful reviews. Michelle’s poetry is very honest and heartfelt. I appreciated Miriam’s book very much 🌷💗
Thanks for your kind words, Robbie, and I’m glad you agree about both books. 💖💖
Excellent reviews! I look forward to reading your newest release, Lauren.
Thanks so much, Mark, and I hope you enjoy my new collection. Can’t wait to read your thoughts. 😁
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Oh I am so sorry I miss this Lauren..🙏🙏🙏 thank you so much..it’s truly an honor to be read by you. Thank you
No worries, Mich! I know you’ve been busy. 😉 You’re so welcome and I truly enjoyed your book!
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