Laura folds into the patio rocker, breathing in summer’s fragrance. The sun boldly hangs in the bright sky, but today marks the tenth anniversary of that day. Her heart feels heavy.
“I miss you, Mom, and the kids miss their grandma. I just long for another chat, a hug, even one more piece of unsolicited advice.”
She watches a hummingbird soar to the pink geranium hanging from the gazebo. Her mother loved these delightful creatures.
“Is that you, Mom?”
The little bird glides to Laura, hovering at eye level.
Rocking gently, Laura feels the comfort of her mom’s presence.
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© Lauren Scott, Baydreamerwrites.com – All rights reserved.
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I’ve had fun writing 99-word stories, and I hope you enjoyed this one, too. 🩷
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
Such a beautiful 99 story Lauren that evokes such a warm loving feeling of the love and presence of your mom that is alway with you. 💗
Thanks for your lovely words, Cindy. This is fiction but inspired by real life. 🙂 I’m sure many of us have experienced moments like this. Hugs, my friend ❤️
You’re so very welcome Lauren.. it felt sooooo real and totally a wonderful piece real or imagined! Thanks and love and hugs to you too! ❤️🤗❤️🤗
Heartwarming story! Nicely done Lauren!
Thanks for your kind words, Suzette. I’m glad you liked this story. 💞
I’ve heard that deceased loved ones appear in the form of hummingbirds. I’ve talked to my mom a few times that way. Sweet!
Thanks, Sharon. I’m glad this story resonated with you. And I have a feeling many people have experienced similar moments. xo
This is delightful, Lauren
Thanks, Robbie. I’m happy to read your kind words. 🩷
Awesome and they are always there with us and loved the beautiful humming bird. Wonderful story Lauren 👏👏
Thanks for your beautiful comment, Kamal. I’m glad you enjoyed this little story. And you’re right, they are always with us. 💞
You are always welcome dear Lauren. Have a wonderful week ahead 💘💘💘
You, too, Kamal! 💖🌻
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I loved your comforting story. I miss my mother every day. There are so many reminders of her during the summer.
I’m so glad, Liz. Thank you, and I do, too. My mom loved her garden and hummingbirds. 🩷
You’re welcome, Lauren.
Hi Lauren, I love this. I feel this whenever I see cardinals – Mrs. for my mother and Mr. for my father. 🧡
Thanks, Barbara. I’m happy to know you can relate to the symbolism of our beautiful feathered friends. 💞
Beautiful and touching Lauren 🙏
Thanks for your kind words, Val. I’m glad you enjoyed this story. 💜
Another heartwarming story, Lauren. Thanks.
Thanks so much, John. I’m glad you liked this one, too. 🥰
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
VERY ENJOYABLE!
Thanks for sharing, Jonathan! I’m glad you enjoyed this story.
I DID!
That is really sweet.
Thanks so much, Anneli. I’m glad you enjoyed this story, too. 💞
I found this brief story to be delightful. Made me think of my mom. Thanks for sharing. 😘
I’m happy to hear that, Kaye. I thought this story might resonate with others, as well. Thank you! 🥰
Touching story, Lauren, but this made me laugh: “one more piece of unsolicited advice.” Hard not to give at times, especially in a parent/grandparent role.
Thanks, Curt! I was waiting for someone to point that phrase out. 🙂 And you are so right. I didn’t understand it when I was younger, but I sure understand it from a parent perspective.
Oh, how beautiful, my dear Lauren …how beautiful! xoxoxoxoxoxo
Thanks very much, Marina! I always appreciate your beautiful comments! 😘😍🥰🌹❤️
I enjoying reading you, always, my dear friend.
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Sending lots of hugs, Marina! xoxoxoxo
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This is so lovely, Lauren…A mother’s presence is always in our hearts. xxx
Thanks so much, Carol, and I agree with you. 🩷
Humming birds are so relaxing to sit and watch.
They sure are, Ian. 🙂
This is a beautiful and poignant story, Lauren. Really captures the feeling of those anniversary dates. 🙏🏼
Thanks for your wonderful comment, Steve. This is fiction but inspired by my mom and me. Writing these 99-word stories is new for me, but it’s been fun and challenging, stepping out of my poetry comfort zone. 🙂
You’re welcome, Lauren. While it’s fictional, it will resonate in a real way for many. Sure did for me. 🙏🏼
Aww, thanks again, Steve! Music to my ears. 🙂 Have a great day!
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How precious, Lauren! I missed my hummingbirds in California. I left 10 lbs of sugar for for to feed the hummingbirds. I haven’t seen any hummingbirds here but my daughter has one or two, so I’m hopeful.
Thanks, Miriam! We enjoy watching them, and my mom loved them, which is the inspiration for this story. I hope you get to see some. They are fascinating! 🩷
Such a comforting story
Thanks, Sadje. I’m glad you enjoyed this story. xo
You’re most welcome
Such a nice story Lauren!!
I love these little moments in life that remind us that our loved ones are never that far away.
Sending you love.
Enjoy the bank holiday weekend!!
Thanks for your lovely words, Marie. And yes, our loved ones are always near. Moments like these are truly special.
We have today and tomorrow off, so a long weekend is always nice. 🙂 Love and hugs to you, too! ❤️
A nice quick story.
Thanks, Binky. Writing these 99-word stories has been something new and fun to work on. I’m glad you’re enjoying them.
So awesome story of Hamming birds , mom’s love is most powerful feeling for everyone ❤️👍🌷 thank you for sharing dear friend and Best Wishes 👏🏼💐
Thanks, Thattamma. I’m so glad you enjoyed this little story. Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead, dear friend. 💖🎉🥰🌼🦋
Most welcome my dear friend and happy week ahead to you too 🌷🙏❤️🥰🌷
I know exactly how Laura feels. ❤ Beautiful Lauren 🙂 xx
Thanks for your lovely words, Debby! Have a good week! 🩷🌷
❤ Happy 4th! ❤
Well done Lauren. Evocatively beautiful 💕
Thanks, Dawn! I appreciate your lovely words. 🌷💗
A pleasure 😊
Awesome, animals can sense sadness in humans. A couple of days ago when I felt sad remembering my late grandfather my dog jumped on lap and cheer me up. Animals are so beautiful. What a lovely story !
I agree with you and love that you shared about your dog. They are truly in tune with our emotions. Thanks for your lovely words.
Pretty great 99 word story, Lauren!
I know many who believe hey have been visited by a passed loved one in animal form,
It’s a beautiful thought!
Thanks so much, Resa. I’ve enjoyed writing these little stories, and this one is inspired by my mom. 🩷🩷
Delightful poem Lauren about the Hummingbird. I like the 99 words you wrote here and the way you labelled the bird as Laura and the others here who miss their grandma, it is like I can imagine it in real life💯🙌
I’m so glad you enjoyed this hummingbird story, Mthobisi. It’s been fun writing these short stories and good practice for me, too. My mom who passed years ago was the inspiration for this story. Thank you for your kind comment! 🙏🏻
I am sorry to hear about your Mothers passing♥🙏. I also lost mine too
You are welcome Lauren🙌
Sorry your mom passed too, but they live in our hearts. Take care, Mthobisi, and thanks again. ❤️🤗
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So nice
Thank you!
This is beautifully written, I could really feel the warmth of a mother’s love while reading it. Reminded so much of the presence I have felt since my gran passed.
Thanks so much, Fiona. I appreciate your lovely comment, and I’m glad it brought special memories for you.
You’re welcome and kept writing it amazing the power of writing
Beautiful lines👌👍
Thank you!
So heartfelt, beautiful Lauren! Even as a young child, I was mesmerized by the Hummingbird! So tiny, so frail, yet the rapid motions in the air was incredible to me!
Thanks again, Don. I’ve had fun writing these 99-word stories, and this one is inspired by my mom who passed away years ago. I just love hummingbirds. You described them perfectly.