Saturday arrived in its discreet mode, late afternoon around five o’clock. Cocktail hour for some. We relaxed on the tan patio sofa, and glasses of red and white sparkled from a touch of sunlight as they sat on the blue round table. Nothing stirred; no song of birds echoed in the trees. Our view of the street over the top of the redwood fence showed stillness. Not even the roof of an auto could be seen as it moved up the road. Only the ringing of chimes in the summer breeze could be heard. Huge billows of clouds in the vivid blue sky floated leisurely as if they had no pressing destination in mind. The warm breeze twirled like a welcomed embrace. The white, wicker rocker gently rocked back and forth…on its own.
Gabbing in hushed voices, it was not our intention, but the world was so tranquil that we didn’t want to distract from the meditative environment. August had already arrived, and yet, it seemed spring in her colorful fashion had just visited yesterday. How time swiftly passed as we grew older. We reminisced about Diane, my mother-in-law. Her birthday was approaching, and we missed her. The rocker kept rocking. Had her spirit joined us? She appreciated good wine too. Perhaps, she wished to indulge with her son and daughter-in-law, but another time, another place. Thirty-one fleeting years. Her life ended when our daughter’s had just begun. A mother lost; a baby girl born.
Our eyes on the rocker, forward then backward, and forward again. Her presence was sensed. We hoped for what some would believe to be impractical. But who were we to say what was possible or impossible? The universe and all it encompasses was too vast to attain that magnitude of knowledge. Maybe this serene, Saturday afternoon moment was the beginning of our ethereal tale to tell. Believing may just be the key component because we wanted to imagine her beautiful self in our company. If only for one more time.
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A beautiful touching story
Thanks so much, Sadje! 💞
You’re most welcome
Thank you, Lauren, for the heart-rending thoughts! Beautiful
Joanna
Thank you, Joanna, for your lovely comment. I appreciate it! 💖
You are more than welcome!
Joanna
It’s very deep, I love it
Thank you so much! 🙏🏻
It’s very deep I love it
Wonderful story
Thanks, Yvette! 💞
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I love this story and I truly believe your mother-in-law’s spirit was there with you. How very special.
Thanks for your wonderful words, Darlene. We may never know, but I definitely think so. ❤️
Lovely 🤍
Thanks, Paula! 💗
What a beautiful write Lauren that is so yummy and warm with the rocker as an anchoring object of staying present and aware of the gifts of your beautiful mother in law while you all gathered in beautiful conversation with your imagery painting a gorgeous picture. 💗
What a delicious comment you left for me, Cindy! You truly saw that special moment for what it was. Thanks so much! Hugs ❤️
Oh I’m so glad that you shared it so we could savor the moments with you.. You’re so welcome Lauren! 💗
I used to wonder about things like that. Ghosts sitting in chairs and that kind of thing. Maybe we’ll never know.
I still wonder, Anneli, and we may never know, so I think believing is key. Thanks for chiming in. 💜
I love the image here and how it moves to become deep emotion.
What a beautiful way of describing this story, Andrew. Thank you.
Hi Lauren, what a surreal experience. Lovely!
Thanks so much, Robbie. I’m glad you enjoyed this story. 🤍
A beautiful story, Lauren. I hope 9it’s true.
Thanks so much, John! It’s inspired by real life. 🙂
A lovely meditative piece. I love the last paragraph, the perfect ending. And totally believable!
Your words make my day, Liz, because of the wonderful storyteller you are. Thank you!
You’re welcome, Lauren! 🙂
“Ethereal tale” wonderfully told and very moving too!
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Thanks, my dear friend! Another memory that inspires. Love and hugs to you! ❤️🤩🔅🤗💗
Oh, yes!
…and love and more hugs to you, my friend!
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I think we all experience things like that.
I’m sure most people do. Thanks, Binky!
Gentle, descriptive, and beautiful, Lauren. I inherited my grandmother’s rocker. 💗
Thanks for your lovely words, Michele, and that’s wonderful about inheriting your grandmother’s rocker. It sounds like this surreal moment resonates with you even in the slightest way. ❤️
My pleasure, Lauren. Absolutely, yes. 💗
What a lovely story that highlights the connections we carry with us in this life and beyond. There is truly something special about those moments where something as simple as a rocking chair feels to bring people back together. ❤
Thanks for your wonderful words, Layla, and sorry for my late reply. A flu bug knocked me off my feet. Anyway, please know I appreciate your lovely, insightful comments. ❤️
What a soothing and serene story of the rocking chair and of your wonderful mother-in-law, Lauren. She is always there in spirit with all of you’ll. Lovely post.
Thanks so much for your lovely words, Kamal. We feel she is always with us in spirit too. This was a meaningful moment. 💞🌺
Yes absolutely true and they always are with us
Always welcome dear Lauren. Yes can understand. Take care and stay safe 🙏🏻🙏🏻💟💟
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You have such a gift with writing in a visual way.
Aww, thanks, Ian. That’s really nice of you to “say.” I always appreciate your support.
Delightful. Read this one day ago but failed to say. Loved it again. Delightful
I’m so glad you found this story delightful, Selma. Thank you! 💖
Lovely!
Thank you!
Lauren, your gift shines with a delivery that had me smiling, bathed in the essence of its beautiful message. The inspiration and fulfillment that flows through your words reaffirm my own purpose in writing. I feel so warm, so content in this reading! Beautiful.
What a lovely comment, Don. Thank you so much! I’ve been sick and still a bit under the weather but finally able to go online. I appreciate your support and encouragement. Have a wonderful weekend.
A lovely story 🙂
Thanks so much, Gabrielle. 🌺
I love those moments of grace when I feel a loved one present. A beautiful memoir piece, Joanna!
They are truly special moments. Thanks for your lovely comment, Barbara, and this is Lauren, by the way. 🤗❤️
So sorry, Lauren! ♥️♥️♥️
No worries, Barbara! I’ve done the same, but I thought to let you know. 🙂 Have a lovely weekend. 💞🌺💞
what a wonderful story and I do believe that rocker rocking back and forth might have had her spirit on it!
Thanks so much, Carol Anne, and I think you’re right. Hugs 💞🌸
Oh Wow Lauren this is a nice story. I can fathom that the white rocker here you have written about are the timeline of events that have occurred and if this was based on a true story, I am deeply sorry for the loss of your grandma but at least a baby was born. This indeed was an ethereal tale💯💯👏
Thanks for your lovely words, Mthobisi. This story has some truth in it, so my daughter was born in the same year that my mother-in-law passed away. A surreal memory as was this moment with the rocker. 🙏🏻
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A beautiful telling Lauren, and a lovely reminisce. ❤
Thanks for your lovely words, Debby. 💞
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