
He pulls me
into myself so
I may see
qualities
he loved from the beginning
though his perception
runs deeper –
mine, a trace of clouds,
then he lifts
my heart and
soul to the starlit sky where
our dreams become us.
© Lauren Scott – baydreamerwrites.com – All rights reserved.
The painting credit: Yours truly.
Thank you always for stopping by.
~Lauren ❤️
Beautiful words and art, Lauren!
Thanks so much, Paula. I appreciate your lovely comment. 💞
A terrific poem of love, Lauren.
Thanks very much, John!
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What talent you have, Lauren!
How kind of you, Anneli. Thank you! 💞
I’m envious! 😘
Don’t be! You’re talented, too! But I appreciate the encouraging words. 🥰
Thanks, Lauren.
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Oh such a beautiful painting you have done Lauren, and your poem speaks volumes..
May our Dreams forever soar.. ❤
Much love my friend ❤
Thanks so much, Sue! This painting was my first and I hope to do more if I ever take a break in writing. 🙂 Yes, may our dreams forever soar. Much love and many hugs to you, too! ❤️❤️
It would sound great as a song !
I didn’t think of that, but thank you so much! 💞
So beautiful
Thanks so much, Saania! 💗
My pleasure
Oh, Lauren what a wonderful ‘conversation’ between your beautiful painting and words.
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I love the idea of a conversation between my painting and words, Marina. Thank you for such a beautiful comment, dear friend.
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I really enjoyed that dialogue, Lauren! 🌺💞🌺🌸💗
Sending hugs, Marina! 💖💖💖
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Lovely poem and painting. You are multi-talented, that’s for sure!
Wow, thanks, Janis, for your encouraging words! This painting was my first and it was so much fun. I hope to do it again someday when I’m not so busy writing. 🥰
Beautifully reflective and your painting is a wonderful complement to your poem. 💖
Hi Michele, thank you so much for your lovely words that are wonderful to read at the end of my day. ❤️
You are welcome, Lauren. It is nice to receive uplifting messages at the end of the day. Or anytime! 😊
Beauty in painting and in verse.
Thank you, Ian! I appreciate you saying so.
That poem is so beautiful Lauren. I love the words, together they are drafting a sacred dream.
And what a lovely painting too – you are so talented!
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Your words are magical, Marie. Thank you so much for your encouragement, and I’m happy you liked the poem and painting. I’d love to paint again sometime. The whole process was so relaxing. Hugs, dear friend. ❤️❤️
A nice poem about true love.
Thanks, Binky. That’s nice of you to say. 🙂
Your visuals are awesome Lauren❣️
Thanks so much, Cindy! I appreciate you saying so. 💖
Romantic and so beautiful, Lauren. Amazing write!
Thanks, Jeff. I’m glad you enjoyed this touch of romance. I appreciate your kind words!
Hi Lauren, this is a lovely poem. It has really uplifted my morning. Thank you.
Thanks so much, Robbie. I’m glad my words had a positive effect on your morning. 💞
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Exquisite, Lauren. What a beautiful love poem. I often don’t care for love poems, but yours… well, they’re just stunning. They go right to the beauty and spirit of deep commitment.
Oh, Diana, you made me smile. Maybe I’ve converted you into enjoying love poems? 🙂
Anyway, thank you for your beautiful words that are a great ending to my week. Enjoy your weekend ahead. 💞💞
I think you have converted me. Your poems always resonate on a core level that feels beyond words. ❤
I’m glad, Diana, and you definitely have a way with words. Thank you, and Happy Friday and weekend. Until retirement arrives, we welcome the weekends with big smiles and open arms. 🙂 💞
Ohhh this is filled with love. I absolutely adore it, thanks so much for sharing Lauren.
Thanks so much for your lovely comment, LaShelle. I appreciate it and am grateful you liked this poem. 💗
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You are truly multi-talented Lauren with words and painting. ❤
Aww, thanks, Debby! I appreciate your kind words. This painting was my first attempt and I’d love to do more, but that may not happen until I stop writing. 🙂 💗
Loving it ❤
Thanks, Aana! 💞
..where our dreams become us. Wowed♡
Thanks again! 💞