I wanted to get away, be a
chameleon, feel my
soul dance to some loud
tunes, sip on something
soothing and cool,
but I could feel your eyes,
just like before, when they
had the company of your lips
and hands. I didn’t want to
react to you again. My mind
was reeling as you willed me
to look your way. I ignored
the current. I wasn’t going to
be swayed by your gaze,
but I couldn’t disguise
the excitement inside.
My body was acting alone,
not listening to logic, but needing
to fulfill the hunger for you,
so maybe I simply stopped
thinking too much, or the music
sent me into a world of lust,
for when you tapped my shoulder
and I looked up,
I fell deep inside your
pools of blue, there was
nothing I could do
no one
could save me, not even
You.
LScott © 2013
Baydreamer ~ Lauren Scott 
Wow Lauren! This is wonderful! It had me swirling toward that terrific ending!
HBL ❤ xxx
Thanks so much, Chris, it was fun and different to write…HBL ♥ XX 🙂
Seduced.
Yep! 🙂
Even though I love all your writings and nothing should surprise me, I always manage to say wow or something to that effect after I finish reading one. Love xxx
Your comment made me say Wow, Bianca. I’m really touched to read your words of encouragement..thanks so much! Love and hugs to you, too! xx
Beautiful. Loved it Lauren. ♥
Thanks, Renee! Hugs to ya! ♥
🙂
absolutely beautiful a big hug ♥
Thanks, my friend, and big weekend hugs to you, too! ♥
Dove into the deep pool of seduction – for that perfect pearl that grows around a tiny irritant of love.
Now why didn’t I write this? 🙂 Thanks for your beautiful words, Eric! Happy Friday, too!
Never can you control or manage a fire..so full of desires..so hot like fire
Very true, thanks so much for your insight! 🙂 Have a great weekend, too!
you too 🙂
Perhaps….my BEAUTY-SEEKING RADAR, is somewhat in a similar idea??? Great descriptive, exciting poem (yours)!!!!!!!
Thanks so much, Jonathan, I appreciate your kind words! 🙂
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HOT-HOT-HOT!!!!!!! :-0
Thanks, Jonathan, for reblogging! I’m glad you liked this one! 🙂
Ohhhh there are so many levels to this poem, Lauren! I love the way it flows and perfect title for it too!
Aww…thanks, Christy, very much for your lovely comment! 🙂
That’s amazing, Lauren. It flows with love and passion.
Have a nice weekend!
Hugs a plenty, my friend xoxo
Thanks so much, Deb! Have a good weekend, too, my friend…Lots of love and hugs to you! xoxo
This is one of those mmmmmmm poems! How gloriously pleasurable to read Lauren!
Thanks so much, Penny, glad you enjoyed some of this delicious cuisine! 🙂 Hugs!
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Oh-yes….the-tragic-yet-beautiful–song-and-dance-of-lust-and-love….I-like-how-you-wrote-this-and-enjoyed-it-immensely…Wonderful!
(((HUGS)))..<3
Aww…thanks so much, Celeste, these are fun to write once in awhile; oh the drama! 🙂 Many hugs back to you, too! xxx
Amazing! =)
Thanks so much! 🙂
Excellent poem Lauren!! I think I might have just met a man like that a long time ago! 😉
Thanks so much, Suzy, and I think I have, too! 🙂 It looks like commenting is working now for you?? 🙂 xx
A beautiful reflection on seduction, Lauren. This is one of my favorites of yours! XO ♥
Hi Diane, I’m going through some archives and found your comment I never replied to. It happens every so often, but I feel bad, and I am SO sorry that I missed it. You know I always appreciate your kind comments and support. Life sometimes gets in the way of blogging and comments slip through at times. Anyway, I hope you’re doing well, and thanks again for your lovely comment. I may re-post this, which is kind of fun to do – to bring some oldies back into the light. 🙂 Take care. Love and hugs! ❤
Just wonderful, Lauren x
Aww…thanks, Martin! xx 🙂