Henry was engrossed in a gripping James Patterson novel when his heart jumped a beat. The second episode this week. It skipped again. He called his daughter in the kitchen, and her fingers found the buttons on her cell for emergency. The sun was setting on this Friday when paramedics arrived. Henry was soon x-rayed. Linda called her older sister, and they learned from Dr. Roberts that their elderly dad’s heart was giving up. They knew their parents would soon be reunited. Monday morning, their loving father took his last breath. He would once again dance with his sweetheart.
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A comforting piece of microfiction.
Thanks, Liz. More reality. ❤️
You’re welcome, Lauren.
A slice of life. I love how you presented it, Lauren. Thanks. xoxo
Thanks for your kind words, Selma. 🩷
If dying was so peaceful, I’d gladly die now.
I think we all wish to go peacefully, but I’m not ready to go just yet. Hugs!
I am! 😀
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I think death is going to be our greatest adventure but I’m enjoying this one right now! Beautifully written Lauren. Hugs, C
I’m with you, Cheryl, and thank you! I think my next post will be more uplifting, but life is full of many emotions. Have a great day! ❤️
What a poetic way to remind us of the last moments… it conceals the tyranny of death when it hovers and pecks and tortures!!
Thanks so much, Balroop, and I love your perspective. 🤗
Such a bittersweet moment! Sad that Henry was slipping away but sweet that the daughters were given warning and time to say their goodbyes. Beautifully written, Lauren!
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Thanks for your kind words, Yvette. It’s better for the hearts when family has time to say good-bye. ❤️
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Thank you, Jonathan!
You’re welcome, Lauren! 😀
I love how you bring the changing light of the sun in as a symbol in this poignant piece. As others said, it’s quite peaceful. 🙏🏼
Thanks for highlighting that, Steve, and I’m glad you felt peace in this little story too. 🙏🏻
A lovely story, Lauren. Puts a positive view on the ending chapter of this book.
Thanks, John. I love how you think. 🙂
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Ah, that last heartbeat… so precious.
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That last heartbeat, yes…bittersweet and precious. Thanks, Marina! Hugs! xoxo
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This is such a moving and heartfelt story Lauren! I had tears in my eyes reading it! ❤
Aww, thanks so much, Carol Anne. When readers react like you did, it says a lot, and I appreciate you! 🩷
Oh your so welcome, Lauren! I appreciate you too! Your always so kind! 😊
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on no this is a sad day but the dance is a blessing❤️
More reality, but you’re right, Cindy, the dance is the blessing, and I think the daughters felt that way too. 🩷
Yes it really is that way dear Lauren💕
A comforting piece of writing, Lauren. Interesting descriptions and setting in so few words. Lovely. ❤
Thanks, Carol. I appreciate your encouraging comment and glad you liked this story inspired by real life. 🩷
Oh wow Lauren, such a heartwarming story that is truly a tearjerker. Yet, the end result is comforting and peaceful. 🥰🙏🏼😍 Sweet my friend. 💖
Thanks for your lovely words, Kym. This is life, right? More reality but a peaceful ending. The girls were able to say their good-byes and the parents were going to be together again. Hugs, my friend xoxo
Bless you Lauren. Sometimes, things end up working out for the best, even if we don’t detect it right away! 🥰💖😘 Cheers my friend. 🥂
So true, Kym! Happy Friday, my friend! ❤️🤗🌷🦋🌺
And the same to you too! Hugs and smooches! 😘🌞😎
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Such a sad feeling lines 😞 this is the real truth that all the children will have to face
Parents parted forever one day or other 🙏😧 reality of life !! My friend 🙏❤️🌷
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Thattamma. I know, part of reality. Sending hugs for a happy weekend! 🩷🤗
Most welcome my friend and grace wishes 🌷🙏❤️🥰🌷
OH my, Lauren, this is so overwhelming.
Thanks for reading, Robbie. This story is inspired by real life. ❤️
Yes, I thought it was 💔
Such a bittersweet story. Absolutely loved it.
Thanks so much, Pooja. I appreciate your kind comment. 💞
My pleasure 😊
Loving the emotional impact of this story that seems to encompass a lifetime. ❤
Thanks for your beautiful comment, Layla. Enjoy your weekend! 🩷
Relatively quick is much better than to suffer for years.
I agree, Binky. My father-in-law is 100 and is suffering so much in body, but his mind is still there. It’s sad to watch.
Simply awesome and so nice to know they both joined together in heaven. Peaceful story Lauren 👏
Thanks so much, Kamal. This story is inspired by real life. ❤️
That is so nice to hear Lauren. May they be at peace with each other. Always welcome 🤗🤗🤗
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You’re a great writer!
This piece is most effective on the heart’s beat.
Thank you!
Aww, Resa, you make my night! Thank you! I’ve enjoyed the challenge of writing 99-word stories, so I’m happy this story was effective. It’s also inspired by real life. ❤️
You are definitely great at real life interpretations/representations/extrapolation. Not sure what the exact word is that I’m looking for.
OMG! It’s Friday!!!! xoxo
I’ll take them all, thank you very much! 😁 Friday, I wish! Cheers and hugs! xo
Hugs!
A wonderful tribute, Lauren.
Thanks again, Mark! I’ve enjoyed the challenge of writing 99-word stories.