Trouble – Acrostic Poetry

On By Lauren Scott, AuthorIn Poetry
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Trouble – An Acrostic poem inspired by Colleen’s post , but mine turned into a double acrostic with a more somber twist. It may even be more of a story than a poem. When I saw the word ‘trouble’ my father-in-law came to mind…

Thriving in life’s sunrises and sunsets
Reveling in life, travel, staying active,
Over the last century he’s lived a fulfilled life,
Unaffected by pessimism, his sanguinity
Bestows a light on all who walk in his circle.
Legendary in his knowledge and keen memory,
Enervated and full of pain is his body now.

Taking each day as it comes, persistent agony
Rarely breaks from its stopover, but complaints
Outstandingly never fall from his lips. It is
Unusual for the query to escape, but he
Breathes gently before asking when the distress will
Liquidate his bones and muscles, when it will all finally
End.

Maybe you can relate? Perhaps you’re in the same situation with a loved one?

On a lighter note, if you find yourself at a loss for words, desperately needing poetry writing inspiration, visit Colleen.

Thank you for reading. ❤️

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81 thoughts on “Trouble – Acrostic Poetry”

  3. So hard. At 80, I’ve seen a lot of it among family and friends. It’s a constant reminder to live each day to its fullest. It sounds like your father-in-law lived a long and enjoyable life. That is to be celebrated.

    1. Thanks for your kind words, Curt. He has lived a long, wonderful life, but not without hard times. He’s just always gone with the flow. And he’s been very active, so to see him nowadays, it’s really sad. Thanks again…

  5. It would be nice if, at the right time, one could simply move on while sleeping. Sorry for your father-in-law’s suffering. His bravery is an inspiration.

    1. I agree, John. The suffering and lingering is beyond sad when the quality of life has dissipated. But we care for him as best as we can until that time, which will be sad enough. Thank you for your compassionate words. ❤️

    1. Thanks for the hugs, Colleen. You said it perfectly. His mind is remarkable, but his body hurts all over. I appreciate your kind words about the poem. Trouble stood out and the words flowed. ❤️❤️

  8. Thank you for sharing about your father-in-law, Lauren! He seems to be a positive person trying to make the most of life regardless of the physical limitation. 💖

  9. Such sad thoughts! I can understand this situation so well Lauren. My mom wants to go, wishing each day to breathe her last. Old age beyond 85 is hard.

  11. It’s unfortunate so many suffer that way. Chronic pain can be very debilitating and little can be done in many cases.

  12. Oh, my dear friend… it is heartbreaking and yes, I can relate. But having his beautiful family near him is a gift itself. Cherish every moment, as I know you do!
    Love and a huge hug.

    1. I’m sure many can relate, but I’m sorry you can, Marina. It’s so hard to witness the suffering. But we take care of him and cherish each moment like you said. Thanks for the love and hug! Sending some your way too! ❤️🌷❤️

  15. Such a beautiful heart wrenching poem Lauren. I know well the challenges of this age and it’s so sad to hear those words…”when will it finally end” but so understandable.! ❣️🙏🏼

    1. Thanks, Cheryl. I’m sorry you can relate, too, but it’s part of life, isn’t it? You’re right, the transition from this life to the next isn’t easy. We pray his is peaceful when the time comes. Hugs 💞

  24. Hi Lauren, I am so sorry to read this poem. I have experienced this recently with Terence’s grandmother who passed last month at 101. She had a lot of pain for the last few years of her life 💔

    1. I remember reading about her, Robbie, and I’m sorry for what she went through and your family. It’s difficult to watch the suffering, but we do our best in keeping him comfortable. Thanks for your compassion. ❤️

  25. This was sad but you did it so well. Wonderful.

    Also, so happy to see you here. It’s my first time to see you. If you’re new. Welcome. If you’re seasoned: welcome. I adore this community.
    Happy you’re part of it too.
    All the best and thanks for the lovely poem. Xoxo

  28. Prayers… my best friend got ill, my hubby & I went to visit & I wrote verses and taped them by her bed, we wept, hugged & she wanted me there when nurses were taking care of her. It was hard seeing my beloved friend in pain. Prayers to all in pain!

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