
My exhausted mind tires of it seeping in like smoke blocked from a flue too stubborn to open, steadily flowing into a roomโs warmth, causing a cloud of gray, unbreathable. A preconceived notion not so massive that the stars would struggle to find room for hanging in the sky. But one with a heart pumping faster than ordinary that could possibly trigger a hint of hullabaloo. Whatever placement of the language, its implication doesnโt waver.
Thus, as I ponder this conundrum, I imagine that perhaps this notion is cloaked in the familiar wardrobe of speculation, hovering in the space between the lines just as F-A-C-E rests on the treble clef. Not a notion I care to keep company with, even in a brightly painted parlor of pastel yellows, sipping tea and indulging in an assortment of delicious pastries. Most likely, the safest conclusion would be to let it lie, tamp it down, express who is in controlโฆ
assuming the situation will faithfully eventuate to be as simple as bread and butter.
ยฉ Lauren Scott, baydreamerwrites.com – All rights reserved.
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I hope it turns as simple as bread and butter. Well done, Lauren.
I think these situations do turn out to be more simple than our thoughts would imply. But who hasn’t speculated about something…when those speculations have been all-consuming? Thanks so much, John! I always appreciate your kind words. ๐ฅฐ
We all know that 99% of the things we worry about never happen.
There is nothing more complex than simplicity. and sometimes our job is just to wait for it to resolve itself.
Yes, there is that necessary patience again…thanks for sharing your thoughts, Andrew.
Sometimes Lauren our thoughts make things so complicated… As we try as we might to make sense of the whole… Sometimes we just have to open the Window… to allow that Smoke to filter through so it doesn’t choke us within its fumes… And the Window is opened via our hearts, as we let it all go…..
Much love Lauren… a masterful piece of writing my friend โค
You conveyed exactly what I wanted to convey in my poem, Sue. Who hasn’t been consumed by an annoying thought buzzing around in their mind complicating matters? Thank you for sharing your insight that I agree with wholeheartedly, and for your very kind words about my poem. Much love and many hugs to you, dear friend. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
You have a way with words, Lauren. Most of us have thoughts and feelings like what you’ve expressed, but we can’t explain it so eloquently. But as you say, it will resolve itself and be as simple as bread and butter.
Anneli, thank you so much for your wonderful words. I was having one of those thoughts a few weeks ago, but it has since evaporated into nothingness. ๐ This poem, though, evolved because I believed that I wasn’t alone in feeling this way. Thanks again. โค๏ธ
I’m wondering if it’s the time of year. The gray skies have set in and we have time to ponder what we are doing with our time, our situations, etc.
You could be right, Anneli. Who knows. And it’s these moments in life that create poetry, all the joyful along with the moments that challenge us. I appreciate your comments. ๐ฅฐ
Poetry does deal with all of those things. Not only the happy times, but all sorts of emotions are fodder for poetry.
Wouldn’t it be nice if it was as simple as bread and butter… our minds like to blur things up! Wonderfully done, Lauren! Many hugs and …Happy Hump Day! xoxoxo ๐ซ๐โค๏ธ๐
I like your choice of words, Marina, how our minds like to blur things up! Simple would be nice, though. ๐ Thank you, my friend. Happy Hump Day to you, and many hugs back atcha! ๐ซ๐ฅฐ๐ซ๐ฅฐ๐ซ๐ฅฐ๐ซโค๏ธ
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Simplicity is love, Lauren and so are your words. Our minds add to a fevered thought with other times the same scenario has happened and it all gets too much…sometimes, very quickly. Your words blew a breeze through and brought a pause. Thank you. ๐๐๐
Aww, thanks, Jane, for your gentle words that warm my heart. You said it well about those fevered thoughts. I had one weeks ago, and so this poem came to be. But all is good and simple now. Sending hugs and thanks again! โค๏ธ๐โค๏ธ
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Thank you, Aana. ๐
HI Lauren, I am usually a bit bird hoppy, but since Michael got sick six weeks ago, I’ve been dwelling on things just like you’ve described. I don’t like having my brain in a swirling mess. I hope your mind calms down and you get some peace and quiet.
All is good, Robbie, but those thoughts sometimes help a poem develop and thatโs the silver lining. Thank you and I hope Michael is doing better. I understand how the mind works when one of our children is sick. My memory is vivid from ten years ago. Hugs. ๐
Hi Lauren, I am sorry you have experienced similar stress and anxiety. Michael is doing better today with the first 2 stents out.
I’m glad Michael is doing better. I also just read your other “doors” post. My daughter is better, although some things are a little fuzzy, but I can certainly relate to a mom’s pain when her child is ill. Hugs.
Patience has a way of bringing perspective and clarity if not resolving some of our conundrums altogether. It’s a lesson that I forget at times, relearn, then forget, then relearn. ๐ Life is a relentless teacher. Beautiful write, my friend.
I agree about patience, Diana, but it’s hard to come by sometimes, isn’t it? And a lesson I forget at times, too. Thanks for your insightful and lovely words. Wishing you a peaceful weekend. โค๏ธ
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Beautiful and lovely words, Lauren. Such a lovely picture. Life surely teaches us how to live.
Thank you, Kamal, for your lovely comment. Wishing you a lovely weekend. ๐งก๐๐
Always welcome dear Lauren. Happy weekend to you too ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Yes, the conundrums of life…
Sometimes my mind has been so agitated, exhausted with a situation that I think I’ll explode.
At times I’ve walked out, stayed away for short or long while.
Then upon re-entry, it didn’t matter any more. Many times, completely forgotten.
Great write! xx
Well said, Resa. Thatโs how Iโve felt, and itโs amazing how upon the return, it just doesnโt matter anymore. The magic of time. Thanks for your visit and lovely comment. โค๏ธ
Thank you for your writing! xoxo
You convey your words so beautifully Lauren. Often the time we stress over seems less heavy when we look back in hindsight. I hope that will be the case for you. โค
Thanks for your lovely words, Debby, and that’s exactly what I’ve experienced (most of the time). All is good now, thank you. Hugs โค๏ธ
Fantastic blog Lauren, the font is very different from your normal writing but its interesting. I do love bread & butter and this is the best breakfast meal to devour in the morning and I love what you said in the introduction that your mind needs the coffee and sipping coffee in the morning is a must to relax the mind and body which was asleep at night.
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I’m so glad you liked this, Mthobisi, and I appreciate you taking the time to write such an insightful comment. Have a wonderful day! ๐๐