Your day’s been long
I know you’re tired
Just relax, as I begin
to feed my desire
With feather touches
I trace your skin
and with my lips
I slowly skim
Your eyes begin to speak
as this game takes two
and your mouth begins to play
breaking every rule
You breathe me in
as your magic creates
an explosion of my soul
I gently embrace
Then with your silky voice
you dive deeper in my mind
and our final move
is exquisitely well timed
LScott © 2013
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
WOW! ❤
Thanks! 🙂
Wow! Thats some remedy Lauren! Wonderful 🙂 ❤ HBL
Thanks, Chris, another “fun” one to write! ♥ 🙂 HBL
love it.. ♥
Since you’re anonymous, I can’t thank you personally, but thank you for stopping by! 🙂
Reblogged this on Amanda's Words / starfire8me and commented:
That sounds SO Erotic!
Thanks so much, Amanda, for reblogging, and maybe this is just a little! 🙂
yes
What a romantic ballet – smooth moves, well choreographed, flawless 🙂
Thanks so much, Eric! I appreciate your kind words! 🙂
Lovely as can be Lauren ~ very excellent remedy this is — for all that ails! 🙂 x RL
Thanks, Robyn, keep this remedy in mind if one is ever needed! 🙂 Hugs to you!
Well-timed and definitely well-written! Your words are beautiful, my dear, and every time I visit you, I get a smile on my face, thinking that beautiful artistic souls still exist!
Thanks so much, Chatty, you’re very sweet and your comment is a wonderful beginning to my day. xx
Such romance I feel in your poem here! Have a lovely day, Lauren!
Thanks, dear Christy! Hope your day has been a good one, too! xx
Thinking about having Pat read this, then going and having a hard, long day! 😀
I think what you’re thinking is a great idea, Steve! Go for it! 🙂
oh smooth writing.. Superb poem.. . I love it… a much better remedy than take two Tylenol and call me in the morning. 🙂 sorry I could not resist that,:-)
hugs and love from across the miles :xxxxxx
Haha, I love it, Francina, thanks for the smiles and for not resisting! 🙂 And thank you for your complement, too! Much love across the miles back atcha! 🙂 xoxo
I wish I could write such intimate poetry Lauren, mine seems harsh in comparison! xx
Aww…thanks, Sharon, I never wrote intimate poetry until last year, I think. I’m not into graphic, but just enough to get the imagination rolling. I guess it’s been okay, so far…thank you, my friend, and I don’t think I’ve read any of yours, but would love to! Hugs!
I haven’t posted any of my intimate work yet Lauren, because I don’t think it’s any good, maybe I will be brave enough to post some later on down the line!
Okay, sounds good! I had hoped I didn’t miss any! 🙂
Ooh you naughty girl! 😉
Hahaha! 🙂