Leaves dance with sun’s rays
to life’s joyous melodies
Hands held, tapping toes –
Let’s boogie and celebrate
with warmth in our hearts and souls
© LScott 2012
Photo: Google Images
36 thoughts on “All Together – Tanka”
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Leaves dance with sun’s rays
to life’s joyous melodies
Hands held, tapping toes –
Let’s boogie and celebrate
with warmth in our hearts and souls
© LScott 2012
Photo: Google Images
Comments are closed.
Baydreamer Writes ~ Lauren Scott, Author 
I LOVE this, Lauren–boogie-ing and celebrating with you today!! God bless you abundantly–love, Caddo
Aww…thanks, Caddo, I’m glad you’re joining in! Hugs and Blessings, sis!
This is an amazing tanka. I wanted to just roll around and dance. No room for that in the house, though. 🙂
Rigel, you made me smile! Thank you so much and I’m glad you enjoyed this musical bit of joy! I appreciate your visit, too! 🙂
oh, I completely Love this, Lauren. It’s so full of Heart that comes right into the reader- me! as read…what a wonderful gift this one is to all. Love, Linda
Awww..thank you, Linda, I’m glad you enjoyed this! Love and hugs to you!
Fabulous Lauren.
Thanks, David! Have a great weekend! 🙂
This is excellent, Lauren! I love the last two lines. Hugs xoxo
Thanks so much, Deb, and I hope you get the chance to boogie and celebrate this weekend! xoxo
I agree – let’s boogie and celebrate xx
Thanks, Christy, I’m glad you’re in, too! xoxo
Both the image and the words were awesome…thanks Lauren!
Thanks so much, Wendell, your words bring joy to my day! 🙂
We all need to celebrate life, it is nothing but the realization that, actually we are alive. 🙂
You are so right, Arindam, and I’m glad you enjoyed this celebration! Have a joyful weekend, too! 🙂
beautifully written Tanka and thoughts, Lauren xoxo
Thanks, Francina, for boogie-ing along! 🙂 xoxo
Adore the way You’re writing Lauren.So touchy,sensual..
Be blessed!
Awww…thanks, Angie, I appreciate your kindness!
Beautiful poem Lauren..so agree with you..let’s listen to the music that is nature and dance and celebrate life
Wish you a love day 🙂
Thanks, Soma, and I know you will definitely boogie through life with the joy you bring to others! Have a great weekend, too! xoxo
Awesome poem Lauren.:)
Thanks, Renee! xo 🙂
Wonderful write Lauren 🙂
I hope all is good with you 🙂
Thanks so much, J! All is good, except being behind on the blog! Arrrgh! 🙂 Hugs to you!
Love it that we can boogie with the leaves!
Definitely, Rose, thanks for stopping by! 🙂
I can hear the rhythm and the beat. Love it.
I’m glad you can join in this musical celebration, Kim! Thank you! 🙂
I liked this a lot I must say! Could you maybe fill me in on this “tanka” business? It’s inspiring to see how you tackle all of the different elements of fictional writing.
Alex, your comments truly make my day, thank you! I don’t know much about Tankas, but the basics are the 5-7-5-7-7 syllable format…they’re a continuation of a 5-7-5 haiku…I’m not sure of any ground rules for topics to write about, but I write from the heart about anything! If you have time, check out http://caddoveil.com. She’s one of my favorite blogging sisters and writes wonderful Tanka..thanks for your encouraging complement again! 🙂
Oh, one really couldn’t tell that you are new to this! Thanks for the info & the link.
🙂
And heaven shines down on our celebration. Beautiful.
Yes it does…thanks, Diane, your comment is beautiful, too!