Look to the galaxy, My Love.
The blue luminous star
I desire to be yours.
If the universe would share,
I’d pull the shimmering beauty
from the constellations
and place it in the palm
of your hands
next to my beating heart.
I wish we could sit upon
a slow-moving cloud,
dangling our legs
Our eyes would show
the emotion in our hearts.
Lips would touch, tenderly,
then with hunger
reeling through our veins
like magnetic energy.
We’d fall into
pierce our private night sky.
Lauren Scott (c) 2021
54 thoughts on “If the Universe Would Share”
This poem, Lauren, is beautiful beyond the words!
Thanks for your lovely comment, Joanna. Your words are a great beginning to my day. 💞
My dear Lauren, I could listen to your words with closed eyes and see this beauty unveil in my mind. A wonderful poem…
What a beautiful comment, Marina. Thanks, my friend! Love to you! 💞💞💞
So beautiful and romantic, Lauren. That was just lovely. ❤ ❤ ❤
Thanks so much, Diana. I’m so glad you enjoyed this touch of romance. 💞💞
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Thanks for sharing, John! I appreciate it!
You are very graciously welcome.
A lovely love poem Lauren, dripping with romantic thoughts. May this love continue to inspire you. 😊
Thanks for your beautiful words, Balroop, and the wonderful wishes, too! 🥰
This is simply beautiful, Lauren! I really love it and hope you’ll include it in your next book –whenever that might be. 🙂
(Sorry to be behind again. Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. )
Love and hugs to you 💕💗
Thanks, Betty, and please don’t apologize! We visit when we can. And I’m always happy to see you whenever you can pop in. 🙂 I’m actually compiling pieces for my next book already, but it’s just the beginning. I have no idea what the finished product will be like. Thanksgiving was very nice and I hope yours was, too. Sending lots of love and hugs to you, too, my friend. ❤️❤️❤️
Excellent, poem and thought behind it, Lauren. 😁
Thanks, John! That’s really nice of you to “say.” 🥰
Very very beautiful.
Thanks very much, Nico. I appreciate your kind words.
That was lovely!
Thanks, Ian! Your kind comment is greatly appreciated!
Hi Lauren. I could imagine every word in my eyes while reading. This is beautiful.
Thank you so much, Divya, for your lovely comment. I appreciate it very much. 💕
I love this poem Lauren. It is SO beautiful and warm!
I’m glad you love this bit of romance, Marie. Thank you and I wish you a lovely weekend. 💗💗
‘dangling our legs into freedom’ ❤ ❤ Lauren ❤ ❤
Wouldn’t you just love to do this, Jane? 🙂 Hugs and Happy Friday, my friend. ❤️❤️
Floating on slow moving clouds? What fun we would have, my lovely. Happy Friday, lovely Lauren. ❤ xXx ❤ ❤
You made me laugh, Jane! We would have fun, wouldn’t we! Hugs! 🥰🌻💕
I chuckled too, Lauren. Oh, what fun! ❤ ❤ ❤
Wow such a beautiful, romantic poem, Lauren. Floating on slow moving clouds this stanza was so fun-loving. Lovely poem.
Thanks so much for your lovely words, Kamal! Wouldn’t it be fun to ride on that slow-moving cloud? 🙂 💕
Yes it surely would, Lauren. Welcome always dear 😊❤️❤️😊😊
That is really nice, Lauren, and very visual.
Thanks, Binky! I appreciate your kind words!
Beautiful Lauren… Oh to sit on a cloud with Moonbeams… Clear skies to gaze up at the stars are few and far between here in the UK…. But you took me high into those magical realms with your poetic words dear Lauren..
Many thanks for your welcome back… Good to be interacting and commenting among friends again dear Lauren..
Love and Blessings always ❤
I’m so glad I could transport you into a little bit of magic, Sue. It’s been a while since I’ve written a love poem. Nature seems to dominate inspiration, along with recently publishing my new book, so several posts of that, too. 🙂 But romance is always a good place to go, I believe. Have a wonderful weekend and love and hugs to you. 💞
Oh congratulations Lauren on your book. Well done you. 😁💚🧡💛
The imagery in this poem is so so beautiful. I could picture everything so vividly. Such a lovely poem.
Hi Sydney, thank you so much for your wonderful words, and I’m so happy you enjoyed this touch of romance.
This is a beautiful poem, Lauren. I am in awe of people who can write such romantic thoughts.
Thanks, Robbie. Years ago, writing romance was my favorite, which was showcased in my first book and earlier blog posts. Thanks for your visit.
I read this poem at first through your posting on social media. I am so happy to read it again. It is just…dreamy! Thanks for sharing your inner word through poetry, Lauren.
I love that you found this poem dreamy, Lisa. That’s what I was going for. 🙂 Thanks for your lovely comment and I wish you a wonderful week! xoxo
You are welcome, Lauren and thank you! xoxo
Wow.. This was a magical verse, Lauren. I love the imagery! Romance is in your soul❤️❤️🌹💐🙏🤗
Thanks for your lovely words, Diana, and it’s great to see you. I used to write a lot of romance years ago, and my first book was mostly about love with some humorous poems, as well. So, romance is definitely in my soul, derived from my marriage with my wonderful hubby. 🙂 Hope you are doing well! 💞🌻
What a gift that would be! Beautiful imagery, Lauren!
I know, right? I’d love to sit upon a slow-moving cloud, dangling my legs into freedom, with my hubby. 🙂
Thanks for your kind words, Mark!
Liked that 1 too even though J is no longer here. Nice memories!
Thanks again, Deb! xoxo