Her heart sings when he says her name
The tiniest things ignite their flame
A simple gesture he does is grand
The simplicity of taking her hand
He makes her smile when he holds the door
Old fashioned and thoughtful, which she adores
Her breath catches when he holds her close
Sensations slide to the tips of her toes
When she wakes in the morn and hears him breathe
Itβs that very moment she truly believes
Β© LScott 2012
Such a lovely poem!
Thank you so much and for your visit! π
Oh my, Lauren! All I can tell you is that this poem is so beaufiul. I truely love it!
Hugs, xx
Awww…thanks, Deb, your words mean a lot to me, my friend! xo
Breathtaking words. Very nice.
Thank you very much! π
This poem is just so wonderful and I love it Lauren! π
Thanks so much, Gabby, I always appreciate your feedback! xo
There is nothing better in life than what you see first moment in the morning when they open their eyes and…smile! Beautiful Lauren!
So true, thanks so much, Wendell!
Very lovely, romantic!
Thanks so much, Caddo!
Beautiful poem Lauren! I love it!!!
Thanks so much, I’mexcited! I appreciate your kind words!
OMG!!! It’s so emotional and beautiful! LOVE IT!!!
Thank you, Pakistani Boy! I appreciate your support! π
Wow!
That’s so romantic! I love the rhymes and the imagery!
Funny thing I wrote about flames, haha
X
Oh, thank you, Nanda, your words mean a great deal, always! And flames are a good subject! π
Lovely Lauren! Holding the door open is such a sweet little gesture, it sure goes a long way! π x
Thanks, Eve, it is a special, yet simple gesture and I’m not even sure if it’s done anymore, as we’re a bit older! π
Beautiful poem to match beautiful thoughts!
Awww…thank you, David! I have say that if my romance poems are ever published, they will be called “Nuggets of Romance” thanks to you! I love that! π
such sweet love’s poem; your love is beautiful in the poem. I love the last line! Linda
Thanks very much, Linda, for your continuing, kind support! xo
Makes me so envious!
That’s not my intention and I hope you know that…
π
Sweet, delicate, beautiful words!
Andrea xxx
Thanks, Andrea! xo
Wonderful poem, it makes me smile π
Thanks, Ami, anything to make you smile! π
Lauren, so romantic – a true love song!
Thanks so much, Betty! π
What a lovely poem Lauren….one of The Most Romantic poem ever
Loved it….such a beautiful read…
Hugs n love π
Oh, thank you, Soma, you are too kind! Hugs for a great Monday! xo
This is such a wonderful celebration of love – I love it! π
Thanks so much, Sheila! Hugs to you! π
you are so good at writing beautiful love poems. Chapeau, Francina xx
Awww…thanks, Francina, your encouraging words made my day! xo
awwww, Lauren. Such a sweet poem! And even old fashioned manners. I really respect that guy!
Thanks, Scott, yes, old fashioned…I must sound real old! π I hope those gestures are still around! And thank you for your kind words about my hubby! xx
Beautiful love poem straight from the heart, Lauren! All the best to you and your lucky hubby! π
Awww..thanks so much, Cynthia! You are too sweet! π
Funny… it works both ways. π
Very nice!
Yes, it does, and thanks, Steve! I don’t know how I missed your comment, so sorry about the late reply! π Thanks so much!
Such a nice sweet poem… : )
Thanks so much and I apologize for this late reply! π
Lauren, you never cease to amaze me at how a long-time married lady such as yourself can be so head-over-heels in love. So blessed are you among women! Thanks you so much for sharing this joy with us and brightening up all our days.
Well, I’m very blessed and lucky and I certainly hope I’m not alone in the way I still feel about my husband and the way his feelings are the same for me. I wish long lasting love for everyone; I truly do! Thanks so much for your continued friendship and inspiration, Rose, and I honestly don’t know how I missed these last few comments! π
I love this. It reminds me of the lovely couples I know who were married 50, 60 and 70 years. It truly is the simplest things which remind us how much we love and are loved.
Red.
Thanks so much, Red. My parents would have been married 67 years on February 24th, but Mom passed away on February 2nd. My hubby and I have been married 23 years and hope for many more years to come…I’m sorry I missed your comment! I seem to have missed a few! Have a wonderful day and I will see you later today! The tough part about blogging is not being able to keep up with everyone’s wonderful posts! π Hugs!